on some deleted poem
28 Mar 2004, 8:24 PM
Didn't the Ramones write this...
on some deleted poem
28 Mar 2004, 8:48 PM
Very good, my friend.
on Watching The Rose Grow by Blindpoetry
31 Mar 2004, 6:37 PM
You did fore the rhyme, but still it flows well.
on A Dangling Poo by zodiac
31 Mar 2004, 7:22 PM
dude......
on some deleted poem
31 Mar 2004, 9:32 PM
This is great. As a person who works with mental patients, I can say bravo. (I think I've read this before, though....is it an edit?)
on How does it feel? by OfaRevolutionAJD
1 Apr 2004, 8:59 PM
Sorry, but the way you have this structured makes it hard to read....
on some deleted poem
1 Apr 2004, 12:25 PM
I'm not good at math so I'm just gonna give this a 10 since it sounded pretty cool.
on hands by New Life Drug
1 Apr 2004, 12:37 PM
I kind of dig this....
on A Special K by OfaRevolutionAJD
1 Apr 2004, 9:02 PM
You should send this to Creed...I bet they'd buy it.
on Cargo pants by tre
2 Apr 2004, 12:42 PM
This is a cute little story..
on Price of an Affair by sonawrote
2 Apr 2004, 7:49 PM
-2 for self-loathing
+8 for self-loathing
+8 for self-loathing
on It Won't Last Long by Spindle
2 Apr 2004, 7:50 PM
At first, I thought this was about joining the Army and going through boot camp....
on some deleted poem
2 Apr 2004, 7:52 PM
Although you misspelled 'invisible', I think this is pretty damn good.
on Alive within the sound of life by Prince of Void
5 Apr 2004, 6:50 PM
Not a bad poem, but I think that you need to incest in Microsoft Word simply for the spell-checker. I've found that it helps!
on A Quick Lick Of Yellow by Jeremi B. Handrinos
6 Apr 2004, 1:34 PM
nice. You don't hear much about old Ra and Osiris these days...I wonder what they're up to?
on some deleted poem
6 Apr 2004, 7:22 PM
hmmmmm, vedy intewesting.
on some deleted poem
7 Apr 2004, 7:52 PM
so sad.