on SEASON OF WINTER by galaxy4unknown
8 Apr 2004, 6:29 AM
Yes, you need to fix the spelling errors, and I would not use "thou" so much (if at all).
on some deleted poem
8 Apr 2004, 5:18 PM
Usually, I really like your stuff...but I'm just not feeling this one, sorry.
on some deleted poem
8 Apr 2004, 7:00 PM
Hmmmm, strangely I do like this better....
on La théologie pour les Politiciens by wilco
8 Apr 2004, 7:15 PM
I can't believe I've gotten no "guffs" and no irate rants from Zodiac....feeling left out....
on some deleted poem
9 Apr 2004, 10:00 PM
I dig this man. It's good.
on Three Bears by hotwire
9 Apr 2004, 10:03 PM
YEs, it is different but the grammatical errors to make it a little hard to read in places.
on On the Theme of Melted Pianos by embersandenvelopes
9 Apr 2004, 10:10 PM
I kind of like this.....very....abstract?
on some deleted poem
11 Apr 2004, 2:01 PM
I think Dave Matthews did this a little better in Dancing Nancies. Keep working on it, though...still a good idea...
on some deleted poem
11 Apr 2004, 2:08 PM
This sounds like a collage of all the shit that Zodiac has said about you. Self-loathing, while it makes for good literary fodder, should not be overused and NEVER let them know that they're getting to you.
on some deleted poem
11 Apr 2004, 2:12 PM
I like it.
on some deleted poem
11 Apr 2004, 2:16 PM
That's kinda funny.
on some deleted poem
13 Apr 2004, 1:30 PM
Definitely one of your best.
on some deleted poem
14 Apr 2004, 8:08 PM
Dig it man.
on some deleted poem
15 Apr 2004, 3:29 PM
Beautiful. Especially for those of us who live in TN.
on Riding High On My Ignore List by horus8
15 Apr 2004, 3:41 PM
I don't really get a lot of it either, but it's funny as hell.
on some deleted poem
17 Apr 2004, 11:57 AM
Diseases of the mind are so much worse than those of the body...
on Do You Like It by hotwire
18 Apr 2004, 7:52 PM
As a man, I cannot help but give this a 10.
on some deleted poem
19 Apr 2004, 12:39 PM
Not your best, but still good and I like it.
on some deleted poem
20 Apr 2004, 4:15 PM
Some good sentiments here. You might want to fix this though..."like I’ll will never die."