Comments bywilco, 581–600 back. Include replies

on Loneliness by tuthaliash 20 Apr 2004, 5:20 PM
Yep...thats lonely...
on Exclamatory Abuse by Blindpoetry 24 Apr 2004, 7:26 PM
nice title. fitting.
on She Searches For Love by validus_vox 25 Apr 2004, 8:12 AM
I was going to give this a 7 until I read the comments and saw what it is about. For what it's worth, I think you should try the above suggestion and try rewriting it and trying to find the "right" words (I didn't get that it was a mentally ill girl until the comments). Still, it's not bad at all.
on Mental Escape by validus_vox 25 Apr 2004, 8:15 AM
Yes, some punctuation would definitely make this better.
on some deleted poem 25 Apr 2004, 11:03 AM
nice.
on some deleted poem 27 Apr 2004, 6:57 PM
I likes it.
on some deleted poem 28 Apr 2004, 2:30 PM
Good one, H.
on Horses by ggawrysi 28 Apr 2004, 2:34 PM
Kinda reminds me (with the numbers) of the old Houghton-Mifflin anthologies from high school.
on castle of pandas part II. by FreeFormFixation 2 May 2004, 8:32 AM
An 8. Simply for being different and amusing.
on some deleted poem 2 May 2004, 9:29 AM
excellente.
on some deleted poem 2 May 2004, 4:00 PM
Paying $25 to slosh around in the mud and rain and the only thing that you get to see is Jerry Lee Lewis perform "Great Balls of Fire". Now that's absurd.
on Black Belt by etherealmaiden 2 May 2004, 4:01 PM
This seems to be a statement on anorexia nervosa, no?
on some deleted poem 2 May 2004, 4:04 PM
I don't much care for the month of May, myself (except for the fifteenth...oh, and the twenty-third, those days are, ok). Good one.
on some deleted poem 3 May 2004, 11:36 AM
sad.
on Gothic by zodiac 3 May 2004, 11:43 AM
This is a rather somber story, if I'm understanding it correctly.
on some deleted poem 4 May 2004, 2:06 PM
and again I must surrender high marks to you, oh master of the (typed) word.
on some deleted poem 4 May 2004, 1:57 PM
Not as pleased with this one as some of your others. I do like this though - All that is left to do now is sit, write, and smoke, - because smoking is fun and so is sitting.
on The Influence of Anxiety by Nicholas Jones 4 May 2004, 2:04 PM
It is an essay with line breaks, but you make some good points.
on some deleted poem 4 May 2004, 4:12 PM
sad, and unfortunately, very common I think.
on some deleted poem 4 May 2004, 6:20 PM
"Did you ever notice that anyone driving more slowly than you is an idiot, and anyone driving faster than you is a maniac?"

-George Carlin