If my comment was considerably "nasty", then you have some serious reality to wake up to. If anything was particularly bullish and outstanding, it was the comment that is presently being responded to. If you knew what the word slake truly meant then you would realize it has nothing to do with liquid in the context of my poem, which utilizes its alternate meaning quite well. If you have to pick up a dictionary while you are writing YOUR poetry, then I suggest that you put down your finger paints and use words that you have actual knowledge of. I bet you use a thesaurus as well...you intolerable, mindstarving, study-case shell of a poet.

Slake is a wonderful word to use because it describes how her temper was moderated. Secondly, "about her person" effectively illustrates that she is not yet being harmed by the sun's rays. They are not, in fact, touching her true body.

Of course this only makes sense to a vampire! She IS one!
If you can't understand that, then read the poem you dolt.

Exactly, so thanks, and I did write it in thirty seconds, at 1:05 in the morning.

Oh, Ms. Allonby, all riled up and no place to go.
Big words from such a tiny mind.
If I had your motivation I'd take up a permanent residence at the Neverland Ranch
It's just poetry, you ignorant slut.

Thank you much and often

where in colorado?

Where in colorado?

Appreciate it, one of my more pondered poems.

Why add more when you can erase the loner? *heh*