poemranker ::20 most recent comments by DarkThirteens

Comments byDarkThirteens, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on Oh No! by foothangingoutofass 20 Feb 2004, 10:14 PM
Interesting.
on A Dream by DarkThirteens 22 Feb 2004, 10:54 AM
If you could point out spelilng errors that would help. Thanks.
on A Dream by DarkThirteens 23 Feb 2004, 6:53 PM
Thanks Horus! lol
I capitalized Gone because I thought it would put more of a punch on the ending? I'm just beginning and trying new things. I'm open to ideas.
on fade in by inka 24 Feb 2004, 8:02 PM
This is exelent! Definately work you should be proud of.
I really enjoyed this poeme. I'm sorry to hear about your story and hope everything works out. -10-
on some deleted poem 22 Mar 2004, 10:01 PM
LOL! This is excelent work!
on some deleted poem 22 Mar 2004, 10:28 PM
This poeme was interesting and really made me think.
on Dear Will, by DarkThirteens 2 Jan 2005, 10:14 AM
This is a poem i wrote at 1:12 a.m. for my friend so i was half asleep. i don't expect tens. lots of inside jokes so don't freak out.
Is this a poem??