on Ex In Bonds by OneFingerAnswer
1 Mar 2004, 10:59 AM
I really like this poem but that line "i can't do what i know it is that i have to do" is kinda confusing...I'd just take out "it is that", but the rest of it is great. I really like the imagery and all that.
on some deleted poem
2 Mar 2004, 11:57 AM
Pretty imagery
on Blonded by the Light by w~* ATHENA *~w
2 Mar 2004, 11:59 AM
interesting... in a good kinda odd way
on paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined
2 Mar 2004, 12:06 PM
coolies.
on Falling by QuirkyWonder
2 May 2004, 12:31 PM
very cute. I like the thought of both falling in love at the same time. :)
on The Tuesday Dogs by Caducus
4 May 2004, 11:49 AM
awww, very sad.