replying on The Other Side Of Never by <{Baba^Yaga}>
18 May 2004, 8:57 PM
I'm not going anywhere.
on Oomphless by shwenatjadeflower
16 May 2004, 7:04 PM
Nono
Drop all of the last line except the first and last word. Then capitalize the last word
Drop all of the last line except the first and last word. Then capitalize the last word
replying on Tripping Through A Paper Square by Shardik
16 May 2004, 3:28 PM
nut-nibbler
replying on and the world evolves by peaceseeker
16 May 2004, 12:18 PM
A few commas couldn't hurt.
"You are what you make of me".....who'd you learn that from?
"You are what you make of me".....who'd you learn that from?
on One More Mile by marvelis
16 May 2004, 12:12 PM
ClichéééééééééééééééééÃ
on and the world evolves by peaceseeker
16 May 2004, 11:59 AM
"live and love inside my universe" sounds like an anglophone Catullus on a bad day.
The whole thing seems a quasi-religious litany to some weird semi-deified entity known as "you." However "you" is most certainly not human because "you" is unable to air "your"m pain in reality. Then again "you" is also not omnipotent because "you" is not the one in whose universe the "living and loving" is done.
Please explain who this mysterious "you" is.
Thank you
The whole thing seems a quasi-religious litany to some weird semi-deified entity known as "you." However "you" is most certainly not human because "you" is unable to air "your"m pain in reality. Then again "you" is also not omnipotent because "you" is not the one in whose universe the "living and loving" is done.
Please explain who this mysterious "you" is.
Thank you
on tribute by francis nor capule
16 May 2004, 7:52 AM
Read the masters. Learn about them so that you can forget later.
TOLKEIN IS DEAD. Unless you are Tolkein frozen cryogenically within minutes of death and then subsequently revived, which you are plainly not, please refrain from appropriating images, motifs and names (tinuviel) from The Lord of The Rings. Otherwise go to one of the multitudinous fanfic sites where you can write about gimli assraping an elf.
Thank you
Thank you
Is this a nightmare or a bad LSD trip? Then again, I remember the time I was caught in a spiderweb in the heart of the desert in a hollow tree trunk. I was in Las Vegas and they gave me some sort of weird concoction to drink and when I woke up I was out in the Nevada desert. Sound familiar?
replying on The Unseen by cuddlytiger17
15 May 2004, 6:13 PM
Pity- the same sort of pity I felt when first reading your poetry- only more so.
on The Unseen by cuddlytiger17
15 May 2004, 4:57 PM
This is quite sick.
I'm sorry you have to deal with this.
And zodiac, those pictures were absolutely disgusting, did you really have to?
I'm sorry you have to deal with this.
And zodiac, those pictures were absolutely disgusting, did you really have to?
replying on A Year Later (edited a bit) by Sasha
15 May 2004, 3:32 PM
Why Welsh?
replying on Tripping Through A Paper Square by Shardik
15 May 2004, 3:30 PM
bow'ls
on Tripping Through A Paper Square by Shardik
15 May 2004, 3:05 PM
guff
on Not Real by DeadtotheWorld
15 May 2004, 12:51 PM
Reason/season
yeuch
yeuch
on Ash Wednesday by Dreamer
15 May 2004, 12:50 PM
I think I'll go cry now.
on An art undone by Bobjim
15 May 2004, 12:10 PM
o'erdone