on Ever Felt by nightii
11 Sep 2002, 6:36 AM
I have now. 7.
on A Guilty Bride's Demise by eldorado
30 Sep 2002, 5:28 PM
I get it. I think. Or do I? Oh well, I liked it anyway.
on Diminishing by <~>
8 Sep 2002, 8:57 AM
Very well written. 8/10
on A prom that could never be by Eric Johnson
30 Sep 2002, 5:53 PM
I disagree with horus (what's new?). It flows well. This is my favorite of your pieces.
on First Impression by devotedwonder
24 Sep 2002, 11:45 AM
I like this one... cuz we've all been there.
on some deleted poem
16 Sep 2002, 8:15 PM
Hmm... poetandknowit doesn't want us to write sweet, and he doesn't want us to write angry, and he doesn't want us to write sad. I guess we'll just have to conform to his style of writing incomprehensible dribble, huh? 7/10, Cory.
on Black Heart by brazen
15 Sep 2002, 11:17 AM
Ok, I know nothing about painting, and apparently little more about writing, but I'm going to have to agree with brazen on this one. When you are writing fiction or a research artile, revision is great; essential, even. However, pieces such as this one are meant to tell a story of emotions - describing how you felt at the precise moment in which it was written. In my opinion, revising such works later can only serve to tell a different story; not to improve upon the first one.
on 50 miles an hour by BEBO
14 Sep 2002, 10:17 PM
Nice lyric. Better than most crap you hear on the radio these days.
on Pissing Rant by brazen
15 Sep 2002, 11:02 AM
Wow, that's... angry. But effective.
on some deleted poem
12 Sep 2002, 5:00 PM
After reading many poems here on this site, along with some downright nasty comments left by readers such as poetandknowit, et al. It was refreshing to read some of your comments, godswife. You always provided constructive criticism, while remaining polite and friendly. So, I just had to read some of your writing. While I must admit that I don't think I completely "get" a lot of your work, I can nevertheless recognize that the auther has obvious talent. Anyway, just wanted to say hi and thanks!
on Bloody Lawyers by april fool
12 Sep 2002, 5:04 PM
That vote of one was just wrong. I enjoyed it.
on I heard it on the grapevine by april fool
12 Sep 2002, 5:06 PM
Haha. Cute.
on The success of a relationship by april fool
12 Sep 2002, 5:12 PM
Me again. I really enjoy your writing. Profound yet humorous all at once.
on Best Friends by ashtar
12 Sep 2002, 5:22 PM
Brutal. But good.
on Eahtatiene by 1Sapphire1
11 Sep 2002, 1:17 PM
I disagree. Doesn't seem at all forced to me. I like.
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 6:28 AM
Well done.
on Simile by *Lyrisick*
11 Sep 2002, 6:40 AM
I agree with christof. I like the content, but standard English will work better for you. Nice job.