Re: Ever Felt by nightii	11-Sep-02/6:36 AM
I have now. 7.
Re: A Guilty Bride's Demise by eldorado	30-Sep-02/5:28 PM
I get it. I think. Or do I? Oh well, I liked it anyway.
Re: Diminishing by <~>	8-Sep-02/8:57 AM
Very well written. 8/10
Re: My Angel by emilys369	30-Sep-02/5:39 PM
Not bad. I'd be interested to read more.
Re: The ONE by Eline	30-Sep-02/5:30 PM
Effective.
Re: A prom that could never be by Eric Johnson	30-Sep-02/5:53 PM
I disagree with horus (what's new?). It flows well. This is my favorite of your pieces.
Re: Surprise by edge	30-Sep-02/5:24 PM
Haha. Surprise ending.
Re: First Impression by devotedwonder	24-Sep-02/11:45 AM
I like this one... cuz we've all been there.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Sep-02/8:15 PM
Hmm... poetandknowit doesn't want us to write sweet, and he doesn't want us to write angry, and he doesn't want us to write sad. I guess we'll just have to conform to his style of writing incomprehensible dribble, huh? 7/10, Cory.
Re: Black Heart by brazen	15-Sep-02/11:17 AM
Ok, I know nothing about painting, and apparently little more about writing, but I'm going to have to agree with brazen on this one. When you are writing fiction or a research artile, revision is great; essential, even. However, pieces such as this one are meant to tell a story of emotions - describing how you felt at the precise moment in which it was written. In my opinion, revising such works later can only serve to tell a different story; not to improve upon the first one.
Re: 50 miles an hour by BEBO	14-Sep-02/10:17 PM
Nice lyric. Better than most crap you hear on the radio these days.
Re: Pissing Rant by brazen	15-Sep-02/11:02 AM
Wow, that's... angry. But effective.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Sep-02/5:00 PM
After reading many poems here on this site, along with some downright nasty comments left by readers such as poetandknowit, et al. It was refreshing to read some of your comments, godswife. You always provided constructive criticism, while remaining polite and friendly. So, I just had to read some of your writing. While I must admit that I don't think I completely "get" a lot of your work, I can nevertheless recognize that the auther has obvious talent. Anyway, just wanted to say hi and thanks!
Re: Bloody Lawyers by april fool	12-Sep-02/5:04 PM
That vote of one was just wrong. I enjoyed it.
Re: I heard it on the grapevine by april fool	12-Sep-02/5:06 PM
Haha. Cute.
Re: The success of a relationship by april fool	12-Sep-02/5:12 PM
Me again. I really enjoy your writing. Profound yet humorous all at once.
Re: Best Friends by ashtar	12-Sep-02/5:22 PM
Brutal. But good.
Re: Eahtatiene by 1Sapphire1	11-Sep-02/1:17 PM
I disagree. Doesn't seem at all forced to me. I like.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Sep-02/6:28 AM
Well done.
Re: Simile by *Lyrisick*	11-Sep-02/6:40 AM
I agree with christof. I like the content, but standard English will work better for you. Nice job.