on Sunshine by alexander
23 Aug 2002, 3:04 AM
Yes it can
on some deleted poem
24 Aug 2002, 3:25 AM
Nice vision oh mighty one
on The box by Ming T. Merciless
24 Aug 2002, 3:27 AM
It's good to breathe man
on Sleep Well by jriemerm
23 Aug 2002, 5:33 AM
Sometimes-10/10
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2002, 3:39 AM
rasp of gratitude-good stuff !
on la petite mort by poetekzen
23 Aug 2002, 5:31 AM
Oui, c'est ca
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
26 Aug 2002, 4:50 AM
I enjoyed this immensely-9/10
on some deleted poem
24 Aug 2002, 3:25 AM
Ok
on some deleted poem
26 Aug 2002, 4:55 AM
Different and interesting, watch the typos though, they detract.
bacchus-thank you for your good wishes, they are much appreciated in this world of cynicism and easy virtue. God's wife, you have clear vision and if god ever gets tired of you, I will be here for you. I like your poetry too-Anne Sexton would be proud of you-my all time favourite.
on recent submissions by <~>
23 Aug 2002, 5:40 AM
Cos with this advice
you will not get any here
Understanding pah
1/10
you will not get any here
Understanding pah
1/10
on Painty by wlshepherd
23 Aug 2002, 5:41 AM
You should patent it- 10/10
I liked this because it speaks the truth that no one dare speak. I disagree with Babbit our master poet, the ending was good, pulling it all together. Did you kill him ? I'm definitely up for the counter top, the floor, the bed with him sleeping through the whole thing as we get wet with those legs of yours wrapped round us both !
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2002, 3:57 AM
Loved it, not sure about the day transpiring though ?
Didn't quite sound right-just nit picking, loved it.
Didn't quite sound right-just nit picking, loved it.
on Jim Shady. by The troubled sinner
22 Aug 2002, 4:09 AM
Yes its your hair, its in your eyes so you can't see to write properly
on Date Rape Gang Bang by Bachus
22 Aug 2002, 5:47 AM
So misogynist
Would you like to meet the girls ?
Yes means no you creep
Would you like to meet the girls ?
Yes means no you creep
on untitled #2 by venusdemilo
23 Aug 2002, 5:21 AM
Kaleidoscopic
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2002, 9:14 AM
10/10.
I knew before I read your comments that you like Anne Sexton, I love her poetry. She was on the edge and you could sense it all the time in her writing, if you want to hear her read one of her best see :-
http://www.poets.org/poems/poems.cfm?prm ID=1071
My favourite is " Just Once "
I knew before I read your comments that you like Anne Sexton, I love her poetry. She was on the edge and you could sense it all the time in her writing, if you want to hear her read one of her best see :-
http://www.poets.org/poems/poems.cfm?prm
My favourite is " Just Once "
on Buried at Sea by brazen
26 Aug 2002, 5:46 AM
porn again poet eh !