on Conversation with a Clock III by morffrom
1 Oct 2002, 5:11 AM
nice ending
on Conversations with a Clock II by morffrom
1 Oct 2002, 5:10 AM
Agree with Z, this is better than 1
on some deleted poem
7 Sep 2002, 12:30 PM
It comes to us all
on Tugboats by poetandknowit
25 Sep 2002, 11:07 AM
I give this 10, because I can. And as for bigbigdog/astro-glide,cfarm/mentor/fred cadawalter/Turbo-Tom/Shrimp-Kills
Ignorance is a rare exotic fruit; touch it, and the bloom, has gone.
Ignorance is a rare exotic fruit; touch it, and the bloom, has gone.
on some deleted poem
19 Sep 2002, 5:18 AM
Whatever it is you make me want it ! Please clear up the typos as it detracts from some well penned material.
sensless=senseless. Also better is ...I am AS real as a toothache..
Also ..I am better THAN any treasure.
"Stubborn and exquisite" reminded me of dear Emily D . 9/10
sensless=senseless. Also better is ...I am AS real as a toothache..
Also ..I am better THAN any treasure.
"Stubborn and exquisite" reminded me of dear Emily D . 9/10
on Tugboats by poetandknowit
19 Sep 2002, 5:27 AM
This poem does not lack experience-9/10
on Tugboats by poetandknowit
19 Sep 2002, 5:27 AM
And it was good
on Work by poetandknowit
9 Sep 2002, 5:09 AM
Ok truce, this was seriously good. You are quite right, my efforts are pathetic compared to others here and this one of yours. I will try to redeem myself.-10/10
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 8:12 AM
I liked it, I think a little was lost by using acoss and cross-wise, a little messy. Not sure about the transfixion either -still enjoyed the imagery
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 8:24 AM
Made me feel good
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 8:34 AM
Purple rocks-a bit scary this but I enjoyed it-9/10
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 8:39 AM
Unusually violent, why call it 99 ?
Great work
Great work
on THE PAIN OF LOVING by longships
3 Sep 2002, 8:41 AM
A terrible glimpse of what awaits us all-well done
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 8:46 AM
It reminds me of a middle-aged man trying to get into the mind of a person he just ain't. Feels stilted
on some deleted poem
30 Aug 2002, 1:01 AM
Very graphic-format a little disconcerting-loved it. 10/10
on Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore
1 Oct 2002, 2:50 AM
I enjoyed this and thought it had merit.
on some deleted poem
1 Oct 2002, 5:05 AM
Hmmm-not too sure about this one
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2002, 12:32 AM
I agree with you
on some deleted poem
30 Aug 2002, 1:02 AM
Interesting-8/10