poemranker ::Waiting In The Shadows by TearsOnRoses

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Waiting In The Shadows

Member since 2004 · Posted 10 Aug 2004 · 3 comments

The pain inside was so strong Nights and days, they seemed so long Without you here with me, Everything is so hard to see The nights are cold, the days are the same When I sleep, I call out your name Tomorrow seems so far away I can't wait, for you to say "I'm home again and I won't leave. Your pain is hard for me to concieve." And back to you, I will say, "Tomorrow is another day. When I awake, you'll be by my side." But for now, my tears I can't hide. I cry alone as I wait for you I feel so lonely, I feel so blue. I found your picture, all tattered and worn Why can't you see, that my heart is torn? I'm waiting in the shadows for a long lost love.

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[10] Prince of Void 10-Aug-04/11:32 PM Reply
i love the title of ur poem ...i love the poem ...really a nice poem
[n/a] TearsOnRoses › Prince of Void 11-Aug-04/12:24 AM Reply
Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 12-Aug-04/10:17 AM Reply
Four metric tons of guff, and a pinch of forlorn hope. Beautiful. Simply beautiful. -10-