poemranker ::Deja-Vu by Rainbow_chaser

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Free verse № 121424

Deja-Vu

Member since 2002 · Posted 9 Mar 2005 · Edited 9 Mar 2005 · 3 comments

when i met you for the first time, I relized i had always known you. when i kissed you for the first time, I relized i had always loved you.

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[10] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 9-Mar-05/9:49 AM Reply
Chubby_chaser
[4] nentwined 9-Mar-05/12:23 PM Reply
simple, and the title adds some piece of elegance to it; but it's something that's been said a million times, and likely precisely like this at least a dozen, just from the common-ness of the words going together in the manner you used. ((though google would say these words had not yet been inscribed in the collective consciousness of the internet))

p.s. relized -> realized
[6] poodietat › nentwined 15-Mar-05/10:04 AM Reply
This is exactly how I was going to respond.