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Haiku № 130458

The Absense of God

by Bluemonkey

Member since 2004 · Posted 2 Sep 2005 · 7 comments

Good Christians on the Sabbath. Riot, rape and death; God left Louisiana.

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[5] T. Jonathron Remp 2-Sep-05/7:40 AM Reply
Not deep enough to be a repudiation of omnipresence; just deep enough to be flooded, gutted, and razed.
[1] LilMsLadyPoet 2-Sep-05/10:51 AM Reply
Yeah...it needs more...far more.
[5] wilco 2-Sep-05/11:55 AM Reply
I feel you dog, but keep working on this one.
[8] INTRANSIT 2-Sep-05/12:27 PM Reply
Flight 2252, 757 heavy. You are cleared for take-off runway two-seven left.
[n/a] zodiac 3-Sep-05/4:25 AM Reply
Where'd he go?
[n/a] zodiac 3-Sep-05/4:25 AM Reply
Also, not a haiku.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Sep-05/4:26 AM Reply
Yeah well there are hardly any Christians where I live, and we haven't been pulped by any McHurricaines. It's like all those Muslim fundamentalists who believe the Tsunami was a message from God telling the Indonesians not to adopt Western customs, but to remain fully scarfed-up. Of course the message would have been rather more potent had the Tsunami struck the shores of California, where Nudity runs wide-rife, and where a Gentleman cannot walk Five Paces without brushing up against a Gay.