Pleasurable Agony

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 6 comments

Pleasurable Agony Biting lusty sinful lips Mounting you raw and ready Thrusts of pleasure fill my limbs Take me, thrill me riding in this fleshy saddle rougher roads ahead... Screaming through the dark bearing down to get you home Passion filled silence awaits Show me, Know me You scream aloud I hear you inside Awakening that sleeping side You take control... I'm feeling anxious burning inside grabbing, biting, tasting, touching hands everywhere restrained and bonded your domination is overwhelming Teach me... The pain and pleasure mingle as one the pure intensity of lust devilishly you grab at me dominating, powerful... Fiercely overpowering my will Make me yours... Fulfill your needs... Act out your wildest fears I'm afraid and willing waiting and wanting I feel you inside sheer painful bliss.

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[5] nentwined 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply

this has a rhythm that I really like, and the thought jumbles are excellent. It hiccoughs a little around "The pain and pleasure mingle as one"

[4] anonymous 9-Sep-01/4:32 PM Reply

is it hot in here...?

[3] nrevatehtni 22-Apr-02/11:30 AM Reply

try reading miller.

[n/a] deleted user 26-Jun-02/1:54 AM Reply

Reads sort of like a bodice-ripper novel...

[8] Redfin 13-Jul-02/10:58 PM Reply

Sounds like a real good time

[n/a] god'swife 6-Sep-02/9:04 PM Reply

The antithesis of erotica. Who needs Keigels, after reading this my vagina squeezed shut.