ever always:

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 3 comments

watch the rumble roll through my head taste the thunder beneath my essence breathe in the heat of infinate quest mine hear my destiny wash through my veins touch me...

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[n/a] nentwined 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply

don't grok.

[5] anonymous 13-May-02/3:06 PM Reply

try to make yourself something other than a person writing poetry...like a storm cloud or something. Remove the whole "you" part, it will make who you are clearer.

[8] Redfin 29-Jul-02/12:01 AM Reply

You said it all in just a few words.