poemranker ::"to do" list:accomplished by razorgrin

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Haiku № 4676

"to do" list:accomplished

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Jul 2002 · 11 comments

Rains of blood and fire Chaos, disorder, discord My work here is done.

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11 comments

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15-Jul-02/1:18 PM Reply
Is this a reference to something? I thought the last line let the first two down, or something, but I don't know what you were going for.
[5] horus8 15-Jul-02/3:21 PM Reply
What? no crucified puppies,I know you've been eyeballing those two in the petco window nextdoor to the sun glass hut
[5] nentwined 15-Jul-02/4:19 PM Reply
reminds me of a bumped sticker I read once; doesn't really pull it off for me.
[2] Red_is_life 16-Jul-02/1:11 AM Reply
Cant see where you are going with this it sounds like something i read on the back of a t-shirt once.
[10] ==Doylum 18-Jul-02/5:24 PM Reply
Well i think its jolly super, and all the rest of your should go and play with your button mushrooms and that includes the girls
[7] Agemo-Z 4-Aug-02/11:43 PM Reply
I think "fire" has two syllables. Unless you're from Texas. Did I spell that right? Syllables? I hope I did.
[9] [mojo] 21-Aug-02/2:36 PM Reply
The jury is out on the syllables in fire. But as an antithesis to the ubiquitous, gentle, natural world of wonder style haiku, I'll buy it. 9.
[8] Christof 23-Sep-02/7:38 AM Reply
This is either the 'to do' list of Slobodan Milosevic or my boss. Thank you for retrieving it.
[0] sk8boardandpoems 25-Feb-03/3:51 PM Reply
im having such a good time putting down zeros for everything you have
[n/a] razorgrin › sk8boardandpoems 26-Feb-03/7:09 AM Reply
And yet it makes almost no difference. Shouldn't you be out playing sports or vivisecting Jews about now?
[2] Heather Dee 17-Sep-05/3:35 PM Reply
I'm not really getting it. Nor am I really liking it.