poemranker ::god damn P.D.A. by sir_heff

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god damn P.D.A.

by sir_heff

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 Apr 2003 · 4 comments

The love that I see, Is'nt given to me. I see it all around, Wile I lay on the ground. I see some friends kiss. I hurt in there bliss. The hurt seems to stay, And it won’t go away. What am I doing wrong? What the fucks going on? Maybe my classmates where right, When they foretold my plight. I'm lost in my frown Happiness all around It’s all that I see As I hang in a tree.

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[6] Luv2write 22-Apr-03/12:40 PM Reply
Ummm... I know how it feels when everyone's mating around you... but not hanging from a tree... so I can't really relate.
[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom 22-Apr-03/7:49 PM Reply
Yeah I know Exactly how you feel. -10-
[9] BleedingRose 23-Apr-03/7:22 AM Reply
As I hang in a tree. When I read this, and I certainly relate to it, i see myself hanging, with a noose slowly tightening its grasp.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23-Apr-03/7:40 AM Reply
NICE EMOTIONS
NICE RHYME
YOU'LL BE A POPULAR POETE
IN NO TIME