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Limerick № 70936

Halloween

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Oct 2003 · 5 comments

If you dare, To be aware, You might get a scare, So you better prepare, Also take care, For others are going to stare. This time of year is rare, You'll need to get out the tupperware. The night is dark, Carefull walking through the park, You don't know what might lark, Or even start a spark, Which causes the dogs to bark. In the creepy, eeirry dark, Hoping to return home without a mark. Knowing that you don't live in an ark, Which is a strange remark. Not to forget the candy, Which tastes oh so deliciously dandy, For in time, it will come in handy. Kathy Jensen Copyright ©2003 Kathy Jensen

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[n/a] ramtheman1 18-Oct-03/2:23 AM Reply
was written for the upcoming holiday. to sort of scare the reader in fun.
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 18-Oct-03/4:43 AM Reply
Chillingly delightful! I especially enjoyed the whimsical spasm of joy I underwent upon reading "Knowing that you don't live in an ark". Of course, the price is another four hours of unimaginable agony as my crippled body jerks back and forth within my cruel Wheeled-chair of its own volition, but I daresay it's worth it! 10!!
[n/a] irishfolksuicide › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 19-Oct-03/6:28 AM Reply
Well if you will sit in a wheelchair all day, no wonder you are stiff.
[10] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 18-Oct-03/5:25 AM Reply
I think it's a good job you copyrighted this poem, in case any poetry tycoons try to steal your work. -10-
[n/a] irishfolksuicide 19-Oct-03/6:28 AM Reply
I think the term 'Limerick' may have been copyrighted by someone else.

It is a verse where line 1,2,5 rhyme, and 3,4 rhyme.