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Free verse № 109314

The Reason

Member since 2004 · Posted 29 Jul 2004 · 6 comments

The reason that I haven't told you how I truly feel, is because when I'm around you, my mind is lost behind the wheel. My stomache fills with butterflies, when we meet eye to eye, I wish that you were here with me, I'm so lonely I could die.

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A favorite of crystal4, tisa7.

6 comments

[8] Shuushin 31-Jul-04/7:37 PM Reply
you aint sposed to vote on yer own stuff, FR!

Has a 50's lyrical quality to it, and despite the indentations and easy sentiment, I like it.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Shuushin 21-Nov-04/7:45 PM Reply
Are you mental?
[10] tisa7 9-Aug-04/6:49 PM Reply
who is this poem about?
[n/a] frdup717 › tisa7 10-Aug-04/10:50 PM Reply
its about you
who did you think?
[10] tisa7 30-Aug-04/2:17 PM Reply
i now that just checking to make sure
[0] nentwined 19-Feb-07/3:55 PM Reply
ow.