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Waste Of Time

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Nov 2003 · 1 comment

Love is only a cliché It’s not like feelings actually stay Nor should it be controlling our ways One thing I consider a fact The heart is what makes you do this and that Not maturity or the way we react So what’s the cause of normal heartbreak It may be from the mistakes we create But more someone was the fake And like believing the lie This pointless rhyme Is just a waste of time Look at all the years we spend Caring about it like a weekly trend I’m sorry for whom this may offend As if you’re surprised All it does is make people dream or cry So does everything else inside We dole it out to everyone Like breaking bread into little crumbs Hoping someone would give back some And like this everlasting crime This pointless rhyme Is just a waste of time Just because we think we feel Doesn’t’ mean it would be real They all have my thoughts to appeal Take only a second to think By the of a moment’s blink Relationships go down the kitchen sink For all those who were and weren’t The one thing I do expect Your every cause was only a simple effect And like the searchless find This pointless rhyme Is just a waste of time

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[9] NoSage 10-Nov-03/3:48 PM Reply
Not a complete waste of time, you hit on a few good points. Your rhymes sounded a little forced at times, but all in all-not too shabby.