poemranker ::Me and my 'ompanion by ShaNoN+960317485

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 74852

Me and my 'ompanion

by ShaNoN+960317485

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 Nov 2003 · 12 comments

You are ho’ny I now come Now and now Of you I lust Brass after asked I now give’m Now and now After my thrust A raise she gives I now hav’em Now and now I lose the erection Down in a lip I now rub tongue Now and now As I lose traction Mount her little I now hul’a hump Now and now I prob’er postern Small little fruition Swells my pride Now and now As I suck her button Swells or fire I now have fury Now and now I bite her bosom She slips out Cups my beating ‘rivy Now and now As squirts I her front Smack my thy I now become ‘imp Now and now She amass her posse'sion Till I am ho’ny Till it comes Now and now To meet in such fash'on

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 6.60 weighted 6.52 rank 667 views 233 View voting details →

20 votes so far. Yours would make 21.20 votes so far

12 comments

[n/a] ShaNoN+960317485 12-Nov-03/6:21 AM Reply
'ope u 'eet ya 'ompanion 2 :o)
[6] ____________________ 12-Nov-03/6:27 AM Reply
Piss ye off, mo fo.

This poem reminds me of James Whitcomb Riley. See, for example, the following:

http://eir.library.utoronto.ca/rpo/display/poem1706.html

http://eir.library.utoronto.ca/rpo/display/poem1703.html

[n/a] ShaNoN+960317485 › ____________________ 12-Nov-03/8:00 PM Reply
Must be that i am a reincarnate of JW.Riley :o) One never knows - thanx fr the URL, looks worth reading, thnx
[7] INTRANSIT 12-Nov-03/7:04 AM Reply
Walt Whitman fantasizing he's straight and dildoing a girl? What?????? 7 for the strange factor.
[0] horus8 12-Nov-03/11:28 AM Reply
The rantings of an antlered dildo.
[8] deleted user 13-Nov-03/11:12 PM Reply
Good for an SHM.
[n/a] ShaNoN+960317485 › deleted user 14-Nov-03/2:03 AM Reply
You seems 2 always think of masturbation & nothing more:o)
[8] deleted user › ShaNoN+960317485 14-Nov-03/2:23 AM Reply
What were u thinking ;) more than masterbating??? huh :o)
[n/a] ShaNoN+960317485 › deleted user 14-Nov-03/10:51 PM Reply
i was thinking abt that girl/whore living near your place:o)
[8] deleted user › ShaNoN+960317485 15-Nov-03/4:06 AM Reply
Yak!!
[n/a] ShaNoN+960317485 › deleted user 16-Nov-03/5:51 AM Reply
well now u tell me. After all is said and done:o)
[8] deleted user › ShaNoN+960317485 16-Nov-03/8:41 PM Reply
Well-done