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A Panglossian Farmer

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Feb 2004 · 6 comments

The farmer to his farmhands, perched upon the stone walls of a lonely existence, would sometimes tell stories; the unfairness of winter, how his daughter had fallen on ice and spent the week in plaster. ' I did not turn to crack, or criminality, or fraud' he would say. The farmhands raised a glass to the sentiment.

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[n/a] richa 5-Feb-04/9:20 AM Reply
Other - because it is more a sketch than a poem
[9] andrewjthomas 5-Feb-04/9:48 AM Reply
nice sketch
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Feb-04/12:57 PM Reply
You certainly win the prize for the week's most aribtrary line break. The prize is six of the best followed by a trip to Matron's office.
[8] NanceXToo 5-Feb-04/2:20 PM Reply
Nice. I like this one.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> 5-Feb-04/5:04 PM Reply
you are funny.
[8] Shuushin 5-Feb-04/9:24 PM Reply
paints an interesting picture; fresh.

walls? plural? why?

I like the "week in plaster" but it pulls me from a simpler time; smacks of technology - maybe a splint?