regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 24.48.206.58	25-May-04/12:48 PM
4some reason I really cconected with this poem, the reader can have his/her own insight with it - 10
regarding some deleted poem...	titan69 62.31.28.184	25-May-04/2:28 PM
yer good one
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	25-May-04/6:48 PM
Please, I would never dishonor my grandmother with such trite smut. You should be ashamed,"heaven's gate" "ascending" let me tell you something when I watched my grandmother die of lung cancer, and her stinky skeletal form crawled over to me with fifteen morphine patches on her sixty pound frame and no teeth, to tell me some gibberish about her being a bad girl and other hallucinations; I can gurantee to you, you nothing of death, and even less of poetry or life, move. I mean this poem is so fucking contrived it's like a given? t will you or can you ever start to tell us what we couldn't already guess you idiot, in any of your poetry? God, you write poetry from the worst possible fucking angles, what the fuck is wrong with you? You've just succesfully described every grandma in the universe. Congratulations. Way to dig crystal. 5.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	25-May-04/6:51 PM
"I will fly"!!!! "beside her"? jesus Christ, it's like right when I think you couldn't write anything more fucking 'day 1 poetry' you do? You're like a sure bet, it's amazing. Yes, will you fly? will you cry? will you sigh? oh geeze, Will YOU JUST FUCKING DIE!!!!!!! good god, you're like the energizer bunny of contrived poetry.
Re: The truths of war by DeadtotheWorld	horus8 24.130.62.63	25-May-04/6:54 PM
Why is this on the best list? You don't even know the difference between "our" and "are"? If you're going to have shit grammar, do it with some imagination could you? liken me does you asshat.
Re: Spitballing by INTRANSIT	horus8 24.130.62.63	25-May-04/6:58 PM
Could have ended stronger. Needs a new last line.
Re: Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha	horus8 24.130.62.63	25-May-04/6:59 PM
Is this yours, or Lorcas, or both?
Re: Waking by wilco	Dan garcia-Black 64.161.177.233	25-May-04/7:02 PM
One moment can create a lifetime of history or two. Good-10-
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 64.161.177.233	25-May-04/7:05 PM
And in an instant, commentranker.com is born!
Re: Spitballing by INTRANSIT	Dan garcia-Black 64.161.177.233	25-May-04/7:11 PM
Can you work 'clit' or 'tit' or 'submit' in there someplace? Damn! I'm turning into a white woman-- Michael Jackson.
Re: What bianca saw!!! by titan69	Dan garcia-Black 64.161.177.233	25-May-04/7:14 PM
I grieve for Bi-anca.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 64.161.177.233	25-May-04/7:18 PM
Yeah...I'm picking the dustballs off of the monitor. Same party; different place.
Re: Secada (Parody of sasha's lying vagina) by Bachus	Sasha 69.138.236.63	25-May-04/7:22 PM
What bow'ls
Re: Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha	horus8 24.130.62.63	25-May-04/7:58 PM
I see so basically you take your shit poetry, and mix it with great poetry, and hope for the best? How inventive.
Re: Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha	horus8 24.130.62.63	25-May-04/7:59 PM
Now that friend is bow'ls... I mean I've seen some sad shit, but that's the gravy. How's that working for you so far?
regarding some deleted poem...	caitydee 152.163.252.165	25-May-04/8:16 PM
Perfect
Re: Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha	horus8 24.130.62.63	25-May-04/8:51 PM
So lord! It's even worse, it's your translation of Lorca, making it both of yours? My friend that's just plagiary with a dash of brains and a dollop of cross bred boredom.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	25-May-04/8:55 PM
Well I got to line 2, passed gas, and gave you a 10!
regarding some deleted poem...	Numen 172.168.112.129	26-May-04/2:32 AM
A great way to blend realism and romance. Show what love is about and that's it's still worth searching for. It's pieces like this that keep people like me sane.
regarding some deleted poem...	Numen 172.168.112.129	26-May-04/3:34 AM
You're right. 1. What is this jumble supposed to be?