Re: Swan on Willow Lake by Caducus	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 212.219.223.8	13-May-04/1:17 AM
Stark and haunting words. The image of sailing "upon gold" is truly, sublimely inspired... this will perhaps remain with me for the rest of my life. Wonderful. -6-
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 212.219.223.8	13-May-04/1:19 AM
Beautifully constructed. As usual, I cannot find a single fault with your work. Thank you. -6-
Re: Prophets by unknown^user	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 212.219.223.8	13-May-04/1:23 AM
Witty, insightful. Perhaps one of the most important poemes written in the last 20 years. -6-
Re: inverse square by ex0teric	zodiac 67.240.155.100	13-May-04/5:19 AM
For dozens of reasons, I don't think the inverse square law is really the one you want to use here.
Re: Prophets by unknown^user	zodiac 67.240.155.100	13-May-04/5:21 AM
Nope^infinity.
Re: Bleeding in the American South by wilco	zodiac 67.240.155.100	13-May-04/5:25 AM
How do you "satisfy a fact"?
Re: Swan on Willow Lake by Caducus	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	13-May-04/5:30 AM
Hilarious, truly; this had me wiping snot of my laptop.
Re: FINGER PIE by titan69	zodiac 67.240.155.100	13-May-04/5:32 AM
Why does the poem have a line through it?
Re: FINGER PIE by titan69	zodiac 67.240.155.100	13-May-04/5:33 AM
Congratulations on posting the worst title on this site since SupremeDreamer's "Ravings of a Dreamer"!
Re: Prophets by unknown^user	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	13-May-04/5:34 AM
Are you some kind of automaton churning out small satchels of snot garnished guff?
Re: FINGER PIE by titan69	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	13-May-04/5:42 AM
The title of this poem implies one of two things - firstly a pie full of fingers - that would be grotesque, or secondly some form of instruction where you would have to literally finger a pie. The poem however appears to be about putting a child to bed. This poem is confused and poorly written and you may not have noticed but their is a large irrelevant line in the middle. This all leads me to believe that you are a stultified quim.
Re: EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	edpeterson 68.79.2.46	13-May-04/6:05 AM
I think it becomes a little redundant, oblong as it were toward the end. I like the first stanza. But from there is seems to drag a little. the ending is powerful but it feels a trifle long. i would take an e or 2 out of the final line, and perhaps add a bit more repetition to the middle.
Re: THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	edpeterson 68.79.2.46	13-May-04/6:12 AM
best poem i ever read. I wouldnt change a thing...0
Re: FINGER PIE by titan69	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68	13-May-04/6:42 AM
(A women)?
Re: Waste Replacing by Phalkon	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	13-May-04/6:52 AM
The title and the first three words made me believe this lyric was about the coversion of bile into feaces in the lower abdomanal tract. Reading the rest of this sorry excuse of a lyric led me to believe that you spend a lot of time playing warhammer in a darkened room with your imaginary friend Peter.
regarding some deleted poem...	francis nor capule 210.23.227.51	13-May-04/7:37 AM
post apocalyptic? or is it just about the futility of conflict?
Re: The Blood-Stained Body by Phalkon	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215	13-May-04/9:31 AM
"ravaged by the loom" Dear god -- this can only be the same loom from my poeme ''The Weaver's Curse''. Something must be done to stop this *warped* loomdividual's loompage before the situation *spindles* out of control!!!!!!1111111111
Re: The Blood-Stained Body by Phalkon	zodiac 67.240.192.252	13-May-04/8:59 AM
"Could it be, as Rush Limbaugh mentioned in passing on a recent broadcast, that the perpetrators of the alleged crime are homosexuals? If that's the case, maybe the motivation for their activities was far different than from what has been discussed in the media's wall to wall coverage of this incident. If these individuals are homosexuals, maybe they were getting stimulated by looking at naked Iraqis in sexually provocative positions. Of course, as Limbaugh said because of the military's "don't ask, don't tell" policy concerning homosexuality we'll probably never know the answer, but I think the scenario is still definitely worth considering. After all, it would answer why the alleged activities took place and it would also provide a solution to the really bizarre question as to why pictures were taken of the humiliating and sexually suggestive poses. Why, you ask? Many people believe that homosexuals have a much greater potential than heterosexuals to be sexual predators. In addition, a sizeable number of sexually dysfunctional individuals (aka sexual predators) take pictures of their illicit acts. It gives them an opportunity to glory in their "conquest" as they visually relive their sickening activities. But here's an interesting scenario to ponder that Limbaugh also mentioned. If this was ever found out to be the case, what would those liberal defenders of homosexual marriage and "gay" rights do? Would liberal Democrats have to adopt an different attitude to this situation and quit their incessant criticism of the Bush Administration and the liberation of Iraq? It's definitely something worth thinking about. After all, if the individuals involved in these alleged crimes were homosexual, or there was a homosexual element involved, who can blame them. They would just be acting out their natural biological inclinations, right? And (so the theory goes) who could fault them for that because their actions would have been a result of the way they were born, not in any way the volitional actions of a lifestyle choice."
Re: She Dreams of Yesterday by Phalkon	zodiac 67.240.192.54	13-May-04/11:07 AM
"the days go on without her...and she dreams of yesterday" makes no sense. "she's never had true love she's never had a life she's never had a family she never had money but she never had greed and she dreams of yesterday" makes no sense. "every day is dark and gloomy...and she dreams of yesterday" makes no sense. "she believes in God and an afterlife but she dreams of yesterday" makes no sense.
regarding some deleted poem...	Sasha 69.138.236.63	13-May-04/12:57 PM
Yes, but that's what happens when you stay on this site too long.