| Re: Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17 |
wilco 24.176.102.131 |
12-May-04/3:34 PM |
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This is better than the last one of yours that I read. I think you just need to expand your vocabulary a little bit and you'll be okay.
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| Re: Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17 |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215 |
12-May-04/3:36 PM |
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Dialysis Tone
After years of being renally refused*
I wish my kidney'd been transfused**
Fil'tring here all alone
I listen to the dialysis tone
lol
* refused a kidney transplant
** by which is meant, transplanted
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| Re: Dear Willy, from Romeo (Edit) by Sasha |
wilco 24.176.102.131 |
12-May-04/3:39 PM |
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Not bad, but I don't know if you should call this a lyric.
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| Re: The Embrowning by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
12-May-04/3:49 PM |
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| Re: FINGER PIE by titan69 |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.225 |
12-May-04/4:31 PM |
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I'm sorry but I don't vote on lewds -no vote-
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63 |
12-May-04/4:34 PM |
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You think next time you might pick good poets?
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| Re: Consumer by nothingtoanyone |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.225 |
12-May-04/4:36 PM |
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"Thy who takes in, gets taken."
"Thy" means "your". You fail.
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| Re: As You Are by MacFrantic |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.225 |
12-May-04/4:44 PM |
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| Re: As You Are by MacFrantic |
MacFrantic 198.81.26.15 |
12-May-04/5:03 PM |
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| Re: Highschool in My Head by MacFrantic |
MacFrantic 198.81.26.15 |
12-May-04/5:05 PM |
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| Re: Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17 |
sliver 63.190.81.16 |
12-May-04/6:02 PM |
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Perhaps you just got tired of being an enabler? Good job.
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| Re: A Word by cuddlytiger17 |
sliver 63.190.81.16 |
12-May-04/6:05 PM |
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Yea, a little overwritten, but so is almost everything I've ever confined in ink. Still, I like it.
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| Re: Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17 |
INTRANSIT 152.163.252.165 |
12-May-04/6:05 PM |
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Suggestion:
Listening to the phone's monotone.
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| Re: A heart without keys by sliver |
cuddlytiger17 64.80.246.251 |
12-May-04/6:38 PM |
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I love your poetry so much. I'm a romantic and so much of your work just makes me feel all warm and mushy inside lol. This poem blends together so smoothly and creates this wonderful sensation of complete bliss. I love it!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
cuddlytiger17 64.80.246.251 |
12-May-04/6:43 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
cuddlytiger17 64.80.246.251 |
12-May-04/6:51 PM |
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Awww...:'( I can relate so much to poems of this sort...
~10~deserves no less...
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
cuddlytiger17 64.80.246.251 |
12-May-04/6:58 PM |
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I like this poem, but it just doesn't seem to flow as well as the others. It seems as though you were pushing it a little too much.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Tintagiles 142.166.123.31 |
12-May-04/8:19 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
12-May-04/10:48 PM |
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| Re: Prophets by unknown^user |
Lifeboatman 203.131.144.188 |
12-May-04/11:12 PM |
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