regarding some deleted poem...	<~> 167.206.181.179	30-Apr-04/12:58 PM
from 'the little garcia-black book of common prayer'? yes? i thought so. here's a wipey.
Re: There Is No Such Thing As A Poem by Aetius	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215	30-Apr-04/12:31 PM
Frankingsteins are much too thick to hold a pen.
Re: There Is No Such Thing As A Poem by Aetius	richa 81.178.232.136	30-Apr-04/1:31 PM
'There are truths bled out through ink-stained hands;' I think you are probably thinking about philosophers, poetes just write pretty words.
regarding some deleted poem...	Bachus 66.229.187.185	30-Apr-04/3:21 PM
Sounds like Michael Jackson's glove.
Re: The road to melancholy by INTRANSIT	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	30-Apr-04/3:51 PM
Just tryin' to get some rest, yep. Not bad.
Re: Air by Bachus	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	30-Apr-04/4:01 PM
I relate to most of this, which is to say it seems like Air and some things air might represent. But prairie dogs don't bark, and how does air hug it's egg? The last verse is great.
Re: There Is No Such Thing As A Poem by Aetius	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	30-Apr-04/4:10 PM
Actually, you have described a number of poems I have read here recently and may be saying they are not really poems, but something less. On the other hand you may be catagorizing what you consider good poems, though some verses belie this. 9 for irony.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68	30-Apr-04/4:17 PM
God's wife might disagree. One nit, and I'm no pro here so use salt if need be, (mostly sad) -,most,sad,. One more comma couldn't hurt.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	30-Apr-04/4:19 PM
Strange that both of our posts today talk about world population. Yours is better because it shows the silliness (or profundity) when one of billions crys out to God, whereas mine just tries to do something politically.
Re: Air by Bachus	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68	30-Apr-04/4:20 PM
As always.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	30-Apr-04/4:38 PM
Better. But why not briefer?: Waiting Sweaty palms Wringing hands
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	30-Apr-04/4:55 PM
I'm suspicious of this. Afraid a line like "Each star a destination for a wish" might be fodder for some contest or a grammaticl glytch like "have a virtues to extol" might be facetious, or "To be, or not," might be some riddle in quotes. Yes, I am no longer an implicit believer. If I were I might say it strikes me goodly and give it a 9.
Re: LOVE-ABOVE LISTE by Everyone	Tintagiles 142.166.244.62	30-Apr-04/5:17 PM
Bwahahahahahaha. Beyond classic.
Re: Do You Rue Barbed Pi? by MacFrantic	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	30-Apr-04/6:58 PM
A funny and clever putting together of sayings and cliches. If you regret us to-get-her ?? Than leave like a tree -> Then leave like a tree
regarding some deleted poem...	jessicazee 152.163.252.168	30-Apr-04/8:08 PM
Love how the last stanza rhymes without reason. Great. And the other stuff, too.
Re: The road to melancholy by INTRANSIT	jessicazee 152.163.252.168	30-Apr-04/8:10 PM
Third stanza doesn't need to be there in my opinion. Love it anyway.
Re: Do You Rue Barbed Pi? by MacFrantic	MacFrantic 198.81.26.15	30-Apr-04/8:11 PM
Thanx Hyp. to-get-her is how you remember to spell together of course B^) A mild oddity that I needed to express.
Re: Being by wHorus8w	w~* ATHENA *~w 205.188.116.140	30-Apr-04/9:05 PM
You need to make peace with your mother. Only then can you be a good father.
Re: vigilante park -- by Ross Robbins by achingwish	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	30-Apr-04/9:58 PM
lovely
Re: If I was a Child of a Perfect Union by w~* ATHENA *~w	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215	1-May-04/4:31 AM
Oh yes, now I see -- our imperfections are what make us special, what make us human... what make us capable of love. You just keep telling yourself that, you second-rate failure.