Re: Hurt by Cougarchic	zodiac 67.240.155.10	1-May-04/8:18 AM
Do you think Johnny Cash singing a cover of Nine Inch Nails' "Hurt" is the funniest thing ever, or the coolest thing ever? - Genuinely Interested in Des Moines
Re: It's True by jessicazee	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68	1-May-04/7:55 AM
On a humorical note, it's funny. The earnestness however, suggests a health issue. I'm confused.
Re: If I was a Child of a Perfect Union by w~* ATHENA *~w	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	1-May-04/10:04 AM
I don't know why you have been flagged as a plagiarizer, don't want to know, and have not read any of your other poems, and don't know why Dark Angel is down on you; but then he's down on me too. This poem is good! Except that if you were perfect, you wouldn't have to look for the cheapest gas.
Re: Fire, Water, and Blood by Katzclear	tadpole 4.228.183.52	1-May-04/10:05 AM
I know those 3 under different terms all offering joy and hope
Re: Depression by terbenaw	tadpole 4.228.183.52	1-May-04/10:13 AM
Whoa I love this poem. . . you haven't really lost hope though have you?
Re: Hurt by Cougarchic	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	1-May-04/10:14 AM
Complicated, a riddle maybe. Like "This man's father is my father's son."
Re: Do You Rue Barbed Pi? by MacFrantic	richa 81.178.232.136	1-May-04/10:25 AM
Interesting enough. The cliches are best when they fit together though. Best bits - She's driving me over the edge/ stuck in the trunk' and 'dawns on me/ sun is rising'
Re: Shame by Joe-joe	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	1-May-04/10:29 AM
I presume that "You" is God and this poem is a prayer. I don't go along with God bringing darkness upon us and then rescuing us from it time and again, but I won't hold that against you. 9
Re: Hurt by Cougarchic	richa 81.178.232.136	1-May-04/10:29 AM
what do you mean by 'real'.
regarding some deleted poem...	edpeterson 68.79.19.48	1-May-04/12:11 PM
Deity, not diety. Unless "you" are obese. Pretty funny.
Re: deviant conveniences by J.B. Manning	Joe-joe 68.194.47.34	1-May-04/1:10 PM
JB, Why the infatuation with the vile and depraved? There is more to life than unencumbered sexual desire. Your writing could be so much better if not for your lack of emotional depth and maturity.
Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	terbenaw 129.8.166.22	1-May-04/2:50 PM
I give you a TEN... minus ten. Heh. You're not a very nice person, and your poetry follows your attitude - it's not nice either.
regarding some deleted poem...	terbenaw 129.8.166.22	1-May-04/2:58 PM
Broken down in simplicity: Excellent!
Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin	terbenaw 129.8.166.22	1-May-04/3:01 PM
Beautiful wordplay... well thought out... beautiful overall.
Re: Fatso by nothingtoanyone	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	1-May-04/3:03 PM
throughout
Re: poor ol mama, we miss you much we miss you so so much. by skaskowski	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	1-May-04/4:06 PM
Sorry, I don't know what you're talking about.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 147.226.175.214	1-May-04/4:22 PM
Compelling. Quite remeniscent of Foucault's Madness and Civilization.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	1-May-04/4:40 PM
Yea, I preach this to myself sometimes. It's surprising how well it works.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	1-May-04/4:51 PM
I like this, especially the last line. I wish you would not use such distracting spacing though.
Re: государства by Wobble McFly	Sasha 69.138.224.76	1-May-04/4:57 PM
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