Re: You by Fire_is_cool	zodiac 67.240.155.57	22-Apr-04/5:38 PM
This reminds me of another recent post about the child of death: http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=20331
Re: Definition of Hypocrisy by Retaliate	capachijim 24.168.25.13	22-Apr-04/4:38 PM
I think this is more of an accusation than a poem
Re: A Sign on a Giant Donut at a Twenty Four Hour a Day Donut Shop Overlooking Pacific Coast Highway in Sunset Beach California at Eight in the Evening on September Twenty Fourth Two-Thousand and Two by Dark Angle	capachijim 24.168.25.13	22-Apr-04/4:42 PM
YES!
Re: Left the key in dream den's door by capachijim	Fire_is_cool 65.100.213.166	22-Apr-04/4:42 PM
I really like your poem. Oooo Ecstasy!
Re: New York by cacophony	capachijim 24.168.25.13	22-Apr-04/4:43 PM
Very, very, very, 100% true. I love New York, but as a New Yorker, I have to agree. It's a 10.
Re: C a n n i b a l by scitz	capachijim 24.168.25.13	22-Apr-04/4:43 PM
Not sure what it means, but I like what I get -8-
Re: Back to the Fistful of Haiku by HaikuMofo	capachijim 24.168.25.13	22-Apr-04/4:44 PM
I really like this, actually -10-
Re: A Fistful of Haiku Lives by HaikuMofo	capachijim 24.168.25.13	22-Apr-04/4:45 PM
Some I liked, some I didn't. I like more than not, so it's a 9 fer u
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	22-Apr-04/5:17 PM
I thought this was a poetry site.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 67.240.155.57	22-Apr-04/5:45 PM
This reminds me of a time when I let a man take me back to his room at the Middle States Home-Jerkymakers Convention because I thought he was a Negro. It turned out he was just a rather dark-skinned Italian taking advantage of the fact that (unbeknownst to myself) both of my retinas had suddenly detached.
regarding some deleted poem...	JohnnyRocker 66.119.33.170	22-Apr-04/9:08 PM
lots of spelling and grammar errors.
Re: Fulfillment by JohnnyRocker	<~> 64.252.164.251	22-Apr-04/9:30 PM
is it me, or is this shaped like the midsection of a man with a semi-flaccid erection?
regarding some deleted poem...	<~> 64.252.164.251	22-Apr-04/9:36 PM
hey sal, i like the feeling of this--it's escapist, and that really suits it. it's in your short lines where this weakens: to hear you sing. and None of them real. i find myself wanting the same beat in these two, because the rest of it has a lovely sing-songiness to it. the same with the ending-- look-and-feel. and sing for me. as i was reading it, i filled in the last line before i read it with 'make me real' instead of 'sing for me.' tht's what i want, but damn it's so cliche. there, now you have it--i'm a closet cliche-ist. i can see her eyes. funny, that. i don't remember her singing but i remember her smoking, and that dress. nice
Re: Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	<~> 64.252.164.251	22-Apr-04/10:35 PM
i feel...embrowned. excellent fun, this.
Re: Blinking by zodiac	<~> 64.252.164.251	22-Apr-04/10:40 PM
so, you think you have something to lose? that is what you have forgotten. you never had it. lock lips, surprise her with a hard kiss, and make a space for yourselves, for a day, at least, before you can't remeber how to reach for it.
Re: Buried pyramid by zodiac	<~> 64.252.164.251	22-Apr-04/10:44 PM
nice enjambments. i struggled with a few of the words pulled out f order, but i see what you are up to, and i like it. and this, this made me smile: till the wondrous seriousness of keeping our feet under us left us, and we fell. thank you.
Re: Something's gone wrong by zodiac	<~> 64.252.164.251	22-Apr-04/11:10 PM
well done. little things here and there to be enjoyed: half-empty glass, the broken record ( and the hiss and catch and hiss of your breathing like an old song), to shake you awake, call it quits, So I kiss your damp hair thinking you'll wake late from this dead sleep, and maybe tell me what it was about me I ought to have noticed all along.
regarding some deleted poem...	<~> 64.252.164.251	22-Apr-04/11:18 PM
swank little trapezoid with a roughed-up leg-up on the inside! ooo weee...
Re: Of Dreams and Obscurity by wilco	<~> 64.252.164.251	22-Apr-04/11:35 PM
or a list of opening lines for short stories?
Re: Blinking by zodiac	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 212.219.223.37	23-Apr-04/2:01 AM
Recently I have become fascinated with the idea of pulling one's cock out. I spend most of my day assessing the probable consequences of pulling my cock out in whatever circumstances I happen to be in.