regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.176.102.131	17-Apr-04/11:57 AM
Diseases of the mind are so much worse than those of the body...
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.233.105	17-Apr-04/11:17 AM
Has a pleasant order and precise words. The second verse is not needed I think, I took the first verse as a rhetorical question. Don't think you need a fourth and fifth verse as they are both answering the same premise (a small mercy remains).
Re: THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	Sasha 69.140.246.96	17-Apr-04/11:31 AM
It's more fucked over than a whore at a bachelor party
regarding some deleted poem...	VechenPushkin 69.140.246.96	17-Apr-04/12:25 PM
Who the hell are you? Before I read ur translation, this was one of my favourite poems! Now this is my favourite translation of poetry period. Great Job!
Re: when do dreams fade? by francis nor capule	VechenPushkin 69.140.246.96	17-Apr-04/12:27 PM
seemz cliche. dunno why. maybe cause Ive read too many poems that say "life sucks"
regarding some deleted poem...	VechenPushkin 69.140.246.96	17-Apr-04/12:30 PM
This is just bad, but I'll give u a 2 for effort
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	17-Apr-04/12:32 PM
Images aside, I am drawn to an endearing quality in the sound of this. The best line: "memory -- a small mercy, remains." The worst line: "Even as we watch him returned at last to earth" A weak line: "believing 'Until death do us part.'" I wish you would look at these two lines again because the rest is really good.
regarding some deleted poem...	VechenPushkin 69.140.246.96	17-Apr-04/12:42 PM
First line would be better as "dark are the skies of spreading heaven"
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	17-Apr-04/12:44 PM
Very rhythmic! But lines 1 and 2 seem illogical, in need of reversal. You have come close to the fatal edge of "Life Sucks" poems where "sick" is the only response, and I would hope you'd stay a little farther back from the brink.
regarding some deleted poem...	VechenPushkin 69.140.246.96	17-Apr-04/12:50 PM
you have just commited an unforgivable poetic sin! Rhyming "sad" with "mad" I'm giving a 3, since you at least had the kindness not to degenerate to "glad" and "bad"
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	17-Apr-04/1:58 PM
I don't like rhymes there only to rhyme, and too many appear this time. But I like the haunting images here.
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.244.56	17-Apr-04/1:18 PM
Do you have a stammer? Short term memory problems? And the simile of verse two is just absurd.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	17-Apr-04/1:37 PM
I think it's haunting and soothing and causes me to conjure my own images of such days, and that's about all my simple mind sees in it.
regarding some deleted poem...	Sasha 69.140.246.96	17-Apr-04/1:55 PM
Maybe it's just me, or maybe I belong to a certain subset of readers that are just weird, or maybe what I'm about to say is actually a fair assessment. This poem fails to make a single bit of sense. But I'll give you a 5 for lunatic randomness
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	17-Apr-04/2:32 PM
Moses didn't say that. Many people did. Why not use a different title.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	17-Apr-04/2:37 PM
This is good! Music and emotion, woven, reflecting.
Re: The painted Chair by Sunshine Conkey	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	17-Apr-04/3:00 PM
The poem is cute, but the title seems a stretch.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	17-Apr-04/3:03 PM
"grief entire" is hard to believe. The leaf image is good. It still borders on "Life Sucks" poetry.
Re: Strange by WondrousMoment	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	17-Apr-04/3:22 PM
A very nice sentiment for the one it is for.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	17-Apr-04/4:34 PM
You should preface this with [SPOILER]