Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.233.44	30-Mar-04/10:32 AM
Impressive.
Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin	some deleted user 68.169.177.107	30-Mar-04/10:33 AM
Sentimentally moving. But why Monet?
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.169.177.107	30-Mar-04/10:45 AM
This is your best yet!
Re: A country called Cha by richa	some deleted user 68.169.177.107	30-Mar-04/10:47 AM
I don't get it either, but it sure does ring nice. It it ok to like it just for it's ring? If so 9.
Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin	FreeFormFixation 209.175.175.82	30-Mar-04/10:48 AM
very IMPRESSIONable
Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin	Shuushin 147.154.235.53	30-Mar-04/10:53 AM
HEY guys, THANKS. Been in training most of the day and I popped out to check messages - horry cow. Thanks for the good words - much appreciated!!
Re: Another Fucking Slow, Sad Song by wilco	some deleted user 68.169.177.107	30-Mar-04/11:07 AM
"It's all I have" This inconsistant meter would be hard to sing. Such sadness.
Re: Once Upon A Time ( a senyru ) by Mr Pig	Shuushin 147.154.235.53	30-Mar-04/11:18 AM
a thousand points for calling a duck a duck (senryu vs haiku). tanka you.
Re: Lost and found by INTRANSIT	anyone 156.99.105.188	30-Mar-04/11:21 AM
What are we looking for? A little more intrigue perhaps?
regarding some deleted poem...	Tara57 147.9.40.112	30-Mar-04/11:56 AM
This poem only touches the surface of the emotions you are feeling...go deeper you can do better
Re: The Trees by anitawit	Tara57 147.9.40.112	30-Mar-04/11:58 AM
I like the idea of gnarled trees this is an interesting poem...I think I would like it better if there was more to it more interesting verse's like this one
Re: stains by calliope	some deleted user 68.169.177.107	30-Mar-04/12:26 PM
Very poignant and a bit depressing.
Re: Scattered Spaces by embersandenvelopes	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.213.67.10	30-Mar-04/12:28 PM
Lovely words, and I must agree. We are.
Re: Twilight Affair by thepinkbunnyofdoom	some deleted user 68.169.177.107	30-Mar-04/12:32 PM
Some good sentiment, especially, "I've burned every bridge . . .only to spend the next few weeks rebuilding everything."
Re: peppermint by the indign	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.213.67.10	30-Mar-04/12:34 PM
Interesting to say the least. Which I'm not known for that. I enjoyed it, and admit it, who wouldn't? It was off the wall and lacking a bit in grammer(But hey like most poets from the before the 20s aren't). -9-
Re: Eyes by tre	some deleted user 68.169.177.107	30-Mar-04/12:36 PM
Well put, easily felt.
regarding some deleted poem...	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.213.67.10	30-Mar-04/12:38 PM
-9-
Re: I Married an Infectious Woman (My Love, 'Futility') by SupremeDreamer	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.213.67.10	30-Mar-04/12:42 PM
Much Improvement! I am indeed impressed. -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.213.67.10	30-Mar-04/12:45 PM
Wonderful.
Re: scabs by Crakyamuni	tre 147.9.40.233	30-Mar-04/12:52 PM
reminds me of an old friendship that went to hell