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some deleted user 68.169.177.107 |
18-Mar-04/5:52 PM |
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March is "unbalanced by nature" as poets and weathermen say and as this poem says well. So why do you feel "stupid" inthe end?
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Dan garcia-Black 64.160.146.253 |
18-Mar-04/7:55 PM |
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If this is true, then I am a dead, cynical lamb.I have never allowed myself to be lead anywhere by anything but the pleasure of disobedience. Or is that what you actually meant?
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Dan garcia-Black 64.160.146.253 |
18-Mar-04/7:57 PM |
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Both you ans T.S. have it right. Kudos.
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| Re: Unadorned by w~* ATHENA *~w |
zodiac 67.240.211.24 |
18-Mar-04/8:05 PM |
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Bachus 24.130.214.180 |
18-Mar-04/10:56 PM |
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I've always been found of self abhoration.
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| Re: Dying Harvest by Richard |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.86.113.159 |
19-Mar-04/3:58 AM |
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lolin all da way 2 da bank! nobut seriizly gud job :P) -10-
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| Re: The Pedestal by Richard |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
19-Mar-04/4:10 AM |
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"The Pederast" more like LOLTTM WTF?
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| Re: The Pedestal by Richard |
zodiac 67.240.155.49 |
19-Mar-04/4:22 AM |
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>>>>GOOGLE CLICHE COUNT<<<<
I donât even know your name (3,900,000!!!)
But that mystery only deepens my intrigue. (25)
I would like to say that I am content,
Just to know that you exist. (126)
Life is full of (88,700) sadness (70) and empty of remorse, (11)
It gives and takes indiscriminately. (369)
But every so often it smiles upon us, (52)
And in that radiant glow (239), we are found fortunate.
It is enough for me to (2,410) bask in the (62) light of your smile, (807)
And drown in the depths of your eyes. (depths: 346, eyes: 531)
>>>>GOOGLE CLICHE TOTAL: 3,993,748<<<<
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| Re: Strange Days, Indeed by Bachus |
zodiac 67.240.155.92 |
19-Mar-04/4:48 AM |
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Yawn. Thanks for the 1994 flashback, though.
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| Re: Buried pyramid by zodiac |
Bachus 24.130.214.180 |
19-Mar-04/9:57 AM |
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Pardon me while I ass yawn with you.
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Bobjim 81.135.49.165 |
19-Mar-04/10:24 AM |
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Being mature is a bad thing. Immaturity is much more fun, so you're wrong.
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| Re: Too much rain by somemorepoetry |
some deleted user 81.178.194.23 |
19-Mar-04/11:33 AM |
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Good, lots of ideas, insights. A bit fragmented though, you go from a bar to a marshland and then seem to list a number of neighbourhood held truisms.
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some deleted user 81.178.194.23 |
19-Mar-04/11:37 AM |
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Quite like your story based poems, they read well. A bit surprised to read about Zulus being weed smokers.
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| Re: To all the assholes.. by KaytiaraFaith |
some deleted user 81.178.194.23 |
19-Mar-04/11:38 AM |
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If these people were idiots, why do you care?
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| Re: The Wake of Your Memory by Richard |
some deleted user 68.169.177.107 |
19-Mar-04/12:14 PM |
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Of the poems you recently submitted, I like this best, especially the last few lines. Like the others, I think it's too wordy, too cliched, but good
Omit "untold."
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| Re: Thank-you, outside by fevriere |
some deleted user 68.169.177.107 |
19-Mar-04/1:54 PM |
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So few listeners!
When I finally find one I go "wordlessand wild."
I like it.
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zodiac 67.240.211.251 |
19-Mar-04/8:12 PM |
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This could be a Reader's Digest "Drama in Real Life." -10-
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| Re: Strange Days, Indeed by Bachus |
Standby 205.188.116.149 |
19-Mar-04/9:01 PM |
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Thanks for rambling on.Interesting, though.
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| Re: Dying Harvest by Richard |
Standby 205.188.116.149 |
19-Mar-04/9:03 PM |
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| Re: 'Fucky Fucky 5 Dollar' by scitz |
Standby 205.188.116.149 |
19-Mar-04/9:15 PM |
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Funny poem. I really like it.
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