Re: rules by roses are read	fevriere 81.106.209.141	6-Mar-04/7:52 AM
I get that pudgy hip thing too.
regarding some deleted poem...	Lenore 64.252.104.160	6-Mar-04/6:20 AM
<An unraveling> That's just what we need. Great Poem!
Re: youre there... by PhSbLoNdE569	zodiac 152.31.228.13	5-Mar-04/1:38 PM
If any of you at all seemed even halfway open to real critical comments, this site probably wouldn't be such a boring, soul-blackening mindfuck. Don't you think?
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 152.31.228.13	5-Mar-04/1:39 PM
If any of you at all seemed even halfway open to real critical comments, this site probably wouldn't be such a egregious, skull-hollowing inducement to inhale gasoline. Don't you think?
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 152.31.228.13	5-Mar-04/1:39 PM
If any of you at all seemed even halfway open to real critical comments, this site probably wouldn't be such a spitting, f(a)eces-smearing rampaging lunatic of a kidney-stone-passing. Don't you think?
Re: No Sunday Clothes by wilco	zodiac 152.31.228.13	5-Mar-04/1:41 PM
If any of you at all seemed even halfway open to real critical comments, this site probably wouldn't be such a pants-wetting nightmare from which there is no waking. Don't you think?
Re: Yellow! by AuntyM	daveslady 140.211.124.224	5-Mar-04/2:46 PM
very true! made me laugh
regarding some deleted poem...	daveslady 140.211.124.224	5-Mar-04/3:42 PM
lovin it, wouldn't mind hearin more on the topic. Hate the man myself. I realise that hate is a strong word but, we are talking about a man who goes to war for oil. If we could only put that much effort and $ into helping those who really need it. YES I remember 9-11, I also have close ties with Iraq so I kinda know how they feel about the situation.
Re: Seasonal Lover by amateurR	PhSbLoNdE569 205.188.208.105	5-Mar-04/4:16 PM
didnt quite understand that... buti liked it
Re: What would I do without you? by Chels85	PhSbLoNdE569 205.188.208.105	5-Mar-04/4:17 PM
omg thats gr8
Re: To Dark Angel by zagerXizer	PhSbLoNdE569 205.188.208.105	5-Mar-04/4:19 PM
o yur my herO!!! i hate dark angel... she obviously knows nothin boutm poetry cuz she SUX ASS!!!
Re: What the fuck is a HAIKU anyway? by titan69	titan69 62.31.23.113	6-Mar-04/12:29 AM
Why is this not on the best list ????
regarding some deleted poem...	titan69 62.31.23.113	6-Mar-04/12:36 AM
you hit the nail on the head there. your comment is not far from the truth!
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 64.12.96.71	6-Mar-04/5:32 AM
Nicely lean. I'm a little with Mr Mage on not sure what it's about. Seems death-y more than anything else. A reference to the female spider consuming the male perhaps? I do like the way it hits the ears though.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 64.12.96.71	6-Mar-04/5:58 AM
One nit. You're masters lack of talent confuses me. I got the feeling the master has some kind of neural disfunction and used to be a great puppeteer at some point. Beautiful and sad otherwise.
regarding some deleted poem...	Lenore 64.252.104.160	6-Mar-04/6:13 AM
Votre robinet est trop petit pour moi. Vous me rappelez Stephen, se reposant dans cette chaise. Et quelle est cette odeur ?
Re: Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired) by INTRANSIT	zodiac 67.240.192.210	6-Mar-04/8:01 AM
"As I watched her, I looked down at my right hand holding a forkfull of food. My left hand was circling my cup of tea. I looked back at her and wondered why." These lines are awful. Just awful. The rest isn't half-bad; just change the end to anything - anything at all! - other than looking at your own hands and wondering why. PLEASE!!
Re: Love a Duck by fuzzylogicisagimp	zodiac 67.240.192.210	6-Mar-04/8:10 AM
DUCKS WITH AIDS!!!!!!
Re: Always And Forever by Pooh_N_His_Honey	fevriere 81.106.209.141	6-Mar-04/9:12 AM
This is not a haiku. UH.
Re: I could rule myself by fevriere	zodiac 67.240.192.210	6-Mar-04/10:23 AM
- no comma is needed after "operastar", which I hope you know isn't a word. - You missed a comma or something after "rose". - "metamorphosising" should be "metamorphosing". - "December doesn't close.)" And what the hell does that mean, anyway? Still it's nice to find one here I like.