Re: To MY Mother by daveslady	some deleted user 63.229.135.44	4-Mar-04/10:39 PM
WOW! Powerful!
Re: In My Minds Eye by daveslady	some deleted user 63.229.135.44	4-Mar-04/10:40 PM
Very touching... emotional, really enjoyable
regarding some deleted poem...	mindsigns 63.100.108.19	5-Mar-04/2:39 AM
It was good until you used the word "fuck"...
Re: sonnet by hoopoe	mindsigns 63.100.108.19	5-Mar-04/2:40 AM
Funny and original
Re: In My Minds Eye by daveslady	zodiac 67.240.192.109	5-Mar-04/4:15 AM
If any of you at all seemed even halfway open to real critical comments, this site probably wouldn't be such a depressing, soul-blackening mindfuck. Don't you think?
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 147.154.235.51	5-Mar-04/5:49 AM
"vituperation" - good word. clever poem[e]
Re: You Were.. by meektiger15	meektiger15 216.109.10.61	5-Mar-04/6:39 AM
Wooo im in a singing mood hahaha!!! yeah its a slow song so when i go YOU it doesnt mean im yelling i was just making clear to yawl that HE was the one who started the foray not me :) kk !
Re: My Guardian Angel by ramtheman1	coffeeangel316 68.117.185.6	5-Mar-04/7:48 AM
Very passionate write. I really enjoyed it.
Re: Hair by ramtheman1	coffeeangel316 68.117.185.6	5-Mar-04/7:52 AM
very descriptive write.
regarding some deleted poem...	fuzzylogicisatwat 195.92.198.72	5-Mar-04/7:59 AM
SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU'''''''''RRRRRRRRRReeeeeeeeeee SUCH A TTTTTTTTTTTWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTT.
regarding some deleted poem...	coffeeangel316 68.117.185.6	5-Mar-04/8:25 AM
wonderful poem, I enjoyed it very much.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 205.188.208.105	5-Mar-04/8:41 AM
First read. "slow dance tarantella" according to blah blah blah, the tarantella is a lively dance. I thought about a National Geographic that had an article on Argentina and it's survival which is due in part to the Tango. I saw a couple of things in this and I didn't like subterranean. gotta run. I'll get back with you later.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 66.167.126.86	5-Mar-04/8:48 AM
This should go back to the... I don't know what it should go back to, but it is not good.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 66.167.126.86	5-Mar-04/8:50 AM
Cold
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 66.167.126.86	5-Mar-04/8:51 AM
Needs a bit of filling in. No feeling of lingering.
Re: How? Well... by RWAndersen	coffeeangel316 68.117.185.6	5-Mar-04/8:56 AM
wonderful write
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 66.167.126.86	5-Mar-04/8:59 AM
I don't quite get this one. I seem to see a grave occupied by a spider-bitten person doing a dance.
Re: Hi by fuzzylogicisatwat	fuzzylogic 172.150.194.99	5-Mar-04/1:06 PM
terrible is the under-statement of the centry and you have the nerve, oh well i thought this site was about poetry, but seems as though it is just another bulletin board for people to pick on one another with no real thought of what is accually going on, so for this i say adu, and will now leave this dreadful site for i can go anywhere on the net and find this crap
Re: Jesus Wept by coffeeangel316	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.114	5-Mar-04/1:26 PM
With this piece, you have balmilised a dumpling that is Beyond Thunderdome. It fails so utterly, that no amount constructive criticism could hoist it from the plunging U-bend to the giddy heights of a lingering death on the toilet bowl, smeared against the porcelain slopes like a squashed urchin. No my friend, this dropping is destined to remain below the waterline, where it shall wallow and sob in a state of appalling agony until the last days of its miserably short life are utterly spent. It's time to pull the chain and move on, lest the contemplation of one stool should hamper the coiling of t'other. Good try though! -10-
Re: Not All Scars by coffeeangel316	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.114	5-Mar-04/1:35 PM
Often at night I wake up to sound of my own screams, and then I realise that I have just based my entire personality on my love for a hot beverage.