| Re: Ring Toss by Shin-Bojangles |
fevriere 62.254.128.6 |
29-Feb-04/7:17 AM |
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Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
29-Feb-04/10:07 AM |
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| Re: The Ghost of Sarah Gyllenhall by wilco |
Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
29-Feb-04/10:11 AM |
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xxx 66.167.126.86 |
29-Feb-04/10:37 AM |
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xxx 66.167.126.86 |
29-Feb-04/10:59 AM |
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stammer stutter flip flop hey, that is not what I meant to say.
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| Re: Two words by bondjedi |
zodiac 152.30.60.186 |
29-Feb-04/11:30 AM |
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Haiku - so easy / I can even do them stoned / And screwing your mom.
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Dan garcia-Black 64.160.147.112 |
29-Feb-04/11:33 AM |
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Thank you both for your insight. I agree with what you say, Shuushin. Thank you for the chuckle, Rockmage. These little "word babies" take on someone's character as I write. I'll never know whose. They grow up and then leave home via internet postings. I wish them well, but they had better not come back to me looking for a place to stay between bad relationships. I did my job. Now it's up them to stand or fail. So, Good luck, my children!
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| Re: Nature Of The Day by impert&ent |
daniella 24.232.82.153 |
29-Feb-04/4:50 PM |
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brilliantly pieced together from bits of sound, thought, pictures, words and whole lives given in one instance over the phone, over a misunderstanding which begain in a safeway and ended with the presence of angels.
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| Re: terraza pizza by daniella |
Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
29-Feb-04/5:23 PM |
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You didn't like the kitten?? What was wrong with the cute kitty?
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| Re: At The Edge of Sleep by GregDeEgg |
Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
29-Feb-04/5:38 PM |
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hey, not bad. not bad at all.
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| Re: Nocturnal Emissions by EAger to Offend |
smlink84 68.98.150.99 |
29-Feb-04/6:19 PM |
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although the illustrations are very interesting, I lost you at the last paragraph...but then again maybe I didn't...haha..
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| Re: Cold Rain Road by middenHeap |
fevriere 213.232.79.42 |
1-Mar-04/3:28 AM |
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Liked the first half but "steel cubes" lost my interest. And the ending - must every poemranker poet discuss piss, shit or paedophilia in every goddamn poem? I can't take this vulgarity much longer. *le "tired artist" sigh*
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| Re: Drunk Satan by smlink84 |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.114 |
1-Mar-04/5:49 AM |
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I have a theological question for you, smlink84: Do angels have wings?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
zodiac 67.240.155.52 |
1-Mar-04/6:23 AM |
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| Re: Nature Of The Day by impert&ent |
zodiac 67.240.155.52 |
1-Mar-04/6:45 AM |
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The last line should be dropped. -10-
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| Re: Inside Out by etherealmaiden |
zodiac 67.240.155.52 |
1-Mar-04/7:08 AM |
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This is a textbook of overused rhymes - places/faces, night/fight, hours/flowers, eyes/lies, walking/talking, crying/lying, pain/insane, and so on. That's not your fault though, and it'll take care of itself as you read more poetry.
Sewing your friends back onto you was a really great imgae and caught me off-guard. I don't know if that's a common phrase, but I've never heard it before. If it's an original, then bravo.
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Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
1-Mar-04/8:48 AM |
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This poem disgusts me. It probably excites you. That's the difference between a Californian hippy sculptor and an English Gentleman.
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| Re: The Left Book Club by Nicholas Jones |
zodiac 67.240.192.250 |
1-Mar-04/9:20 AM |
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xxx 66.167.126.86 |
1-Mar-04/10:40 AM |
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Dan garcia-Black 66.159.232.223 |
1-Mar-04/10:47 AM |
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Delicious! I'll have mine without the wasabi.
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