regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.172.185	14-Feb-04/9:36 AM
Perhaps if you worked on this a bit.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.172.185	14-Feb-04/9:37 AM
Some good imagery.
Re: The musician by richa	plinkyponk 62.254.64.7	13-Feb-04/3:36 PM
nice write
Re: Black Snake by Butterflywriter	plinkyponk 62.254.64.7	13-Feb-04/3:37 PM
witty how it stops at the end
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.172.185	14-Feb-04/9:38 AM
Makes me cold.
Re: i need a title by That One	That One 66.119.33.170	13-Feb-04/4:39 PM
such clever critique you make for me. How's that working out for you?
Re: i need a title by That One	That One 66.119.33.170	13-Feb-04/4:39 PM
such clever critique you make for me. How's that working out for you?
regarding some deleted poem...	nothingtoanyone 65.177.241.191	13-Feb-04/9:14 PM
Thanks Yeah your right I didnt care if I spelled things wrong I just had to put my feelings on paper.
Re: Rant by blkarak	savagemikel 24.195.174.60	14-Feb-04/5:59 AM
It's very good I think. Very good. Poems like this are a bit dense for my personal taste. I mean for reading. When I do read it, I picture it more as a spoken piece. I think it would be great for that.
regarding some deleted poem...	plinkyponk 62.254.64.7	13-Feb-04/3:34 PM
it was going great until that last stanza where the rhyming just got in the way
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.172.185	14-Feb-04/9:28 AM
Does not quite gell.
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215	14-Feb-04/10:35 AM
What use is woman? She leaked a brown in a policeman's Box.
Re: outSourcing by dreamsdiefirst	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215	15-Feb-04/6:01 AM
Oh dear, no, indeed. The last time we tried that, they, they, they started hopping all about the place, dreadful thing. http://www.nationmaster.com/encyclopedia/Hopping-corpse
Re: Kusaku by dreamsdiefirst	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215	15-Feb-04/6:04 AM
KAWAII!!!!!11111 ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ JAPANESE IS JUST LIKE ELVISH RUNES IT IS SO MAGICAL
regarding some deleted poem...	plinkyponk 62.254.64.7	15-Feb-04/7:16 AM
fun..
regarding some deleted poem...	plinkyponk 62.254.64.7	15-Feb-04/7:16 AM
fun..
regarding some deleted poem...	plinkyponk 62.254.64.7	15-Feb-04/7:16 AM
fun..
Re: outSourcing by dreamsdiefirst	Goad 217.226.25.221	15-Feb-04/8:35 AM
Indeed. Imagine the day a nation filled with fat ignorant people born into more wealth and privelege than 99.9% of people who have ever lived stop whining about someone else getting a chance at life.
Re: Insomnia by dreamsdiefirst	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	15-Feb-04/2:39 PM
five seven then five do you need an abucus? I counted this thrice. actually, you can play with the syllable count - I just like posting that when I get the chance. ;o) Did you do it on purpose? If so, why not just stick the other syllable ("I") in there? With "in som ni a" you are basically halfway there; that's a tough one.
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.233.90	15-Feb-04/3:11 PM
Seriously, sort out the spelling. Don't really see the stretched out legs (not in this context. Some nice wordplay though - some/others/all