| Re: The Grandfather Suite by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
Bachus 24.126.116.54 |
24-Jan-04/12:02 PM |
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| Re: Once the moon turned me into a hairy vagina by horus8 |
pretty_poet_21 198.111.220.6 |
24-Jan-04/12:02 PM |
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Have to give credit for originality...but that's all.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Bachus 24.126.116.54 |
24-Jan-04/12:05 PM |
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It's amusing to see you amazing yourself, painfully amusing.
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| Re: The Grandfather Suite by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
pretty_poet_21 198.111.220.6 |
24-Jan-04/12:07 PM |
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I like how the poem is divided into sections. It makes one pause and reflect on each.
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| Re: sex in the city/sex in the country by tralala42001 |
tralala42001 67.123.225.225 |
24-Jan-04/12:25 PM |
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that name (son of dad) is already taken by the craziest awesomest most turbolest batmanest kickassest super turbo posted upness band around!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
pretty_poet_21 198.111.220.6 |
24-Jan-04/12:35 PM |
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| Re: sex in the city/sex in the country by tralala42001 |
tralala42001 67.123.225.225 |
24-Jan-04/12:52 PM |
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the band IS "Son Of Dad" (from Los Angeles)
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
pretty_poet_21 198.111.220.6 |
24-Jan-04/12:52 PM |
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I guess I shall be labeled as simple minded as you Lydia, for I enjoyed your poem (third stanza gets applause) And to those so far above the rest of us, so what if it resembles a million others? Love/Hate are very common to write about. At least this poem makes sense, which is more than I can say for some of yours. Poetry isn't just about writing large words in succession, it's writing about your feelings, and putting feeling into your peom. A poem is no good, unless one walks away from it with a sense of the writer's point of view. And as for William Blake...sometimes simplicity is best.
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| Re: I hope it hurts by pretty_poet_21 |
some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
24-Jan-04/1:01 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
xxx 68.165.172.185 |
24-Jan-04/1:03 PM |
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some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
24-Jan-04/1:03 PM |
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some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
24-Jan-04/1:05 PM |
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This poesied was flung out during potty traininged.
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some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
24-Jan-04/1:27 PM |
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This lashed at me like the most tophatted of insight.
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| Re: His Master's Jodhpurs by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
pretty_poet_21 198.111.220.6 |
24-Jan-04/1:06 PM |
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No idea what Jodhpurs are...but once I reached the second stanza the poem had my full attention straight through the end.
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| Re: Once the moon turned me into a hairy vagina by horus8 |
some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
24-Jan-04/1:13 PM |
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| Re: Thoughts by nicole081083 |
some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
24-Jan-04/1:14 PM |
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Thoughts cannot be replaced. They are forever swimming
where the wildbums grow.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
24-Jan-04/1:16 PM |
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Why are you a woman in this one?
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| Re: Sci-fi ode to poemranker nicknames by zodiac |
some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
24-Jan-04/1:18 PM |
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I see no nicknames here. Please do not appropriate Jesus without appropriate documentation.
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| Re: Judgement by penguin fiend |
some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
24-Jan-04/1:19 PM |
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| Re: I hope it hurts by pretty_poet_21 |
some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
24-Jan-04/1:22 PM |
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Please refract my latest comments.
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