regarding some deleted poem...	cleverdevice 212.219.142.161	21-Jan-04/2:13 AM
This is the best poem at the moment? Can't people get past the cliched metaphors and some frankly naive writing. I mean, keeping your heart under 'lock and key'? done a thousand times before, Crystal, 'you have mastered quite a feat' - ? That's what the queen says to people who have climbed a mountain for the first time! Funny how 12 of the 16 10 votes are anonymous, isn't it? -5-
Re: Decide by hatedestruction	hatedestruction 167.196.165.36	21-Jan-04/5:56 AM
this was a time in my life when I was torn between two relationships, I didn't quite understand why I had to choose, such as we all have to
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 67.240.155.206	21-Jan-04/8:21 AM
Um, all those anonymous 10 votes are the same person, right? I mean, they're you - the author. I know I'm new to the ranker and everything - so could someone explain something to me? Why would someone submit something here, ostensibly to open it up to the criticism and commentary of the world (which any good poem needs, especially if you're William Blake,) and then jack up its score like that? Do you login and say, oh look - a lot of people sure like my poem; it must be pretty good? Do you actually fool yourself with that? Or have you posted this only for OUR benefit, since you (times 10 anonymous votes) know it's in its perfect form already? The 16 tens this pretty unoriginal crap got is your way of letting us know how great we should think you are? Whatever gets you off, I guess. Have fun with your invisible coterie of imaginary followers. Oh, and this -http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=79164 - is for you.
Re: Scarlet Wyvern by SupremeDreamer	zodiac 152.18.33.220	20-Jan-04/2:34 PM
flying reptile (pinkish or darker).
regarding some deleted poem...	Goad 80.132.178.253	20-Jan-04/2:45 PM
I agree the last line can (should?) go. I found it jarring. I also don't think the inversion in st. 3 is necessary/desired, although I'm the last person who should be telling someone not to affect a poeticism, lol.
Re: Scarlet Wyvern by SupremeDreamer	SupremeDreamer 204.31.178.80	20-Jan-04/2:47 PM
I have found the name of names! Baptized in blood, may this poem be known as Scarlet Wyvern!!!
regarding some deleted poem...	Everyone 163.1.146.87	20-Jan-04/3:04 PM
Is God invisible, as the Hymn "Immortal, Invisible" claims? Discuss.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 152.18.33.194	20-Jan-04/5:41 PM
I'm alright with the inversion. Kinda sexy.
regarding some deleted poem...	penguin fiend 216.207.132.167	20-Jan-04/6:22 PM
Something tells me this is much deeper than it seems
Re: Fool by ez2replace	penguin fiend 216.207.132.167	20-Jan-04/6:52 PM
pretend i gave you a 10.5, cuz this is better than most of the perfect poems out there
Re: Jesus was the Antichrist by TheDevil	penguin fiend 216.207.132.167	20-Jan-04/6:55 PM
top notch, true and mildly amusing
Re: Evacuation harnessed angel Vs. The antichrist by Bachus	penguin fiend 216.207.132.167	20-Jan-04/6:58 PM
ego-check, asile -=Dark_ Angel=-, thats ego-check, asile -=Dark_ Angel=-, keep writing man
Re: Anti-Rhymer [translation included] by Y2kSlamPoet	penguin fiend 216.207.132.167	20-Jan-04/7:04 PM
a rebel in a wheelchair, thats awesome dude
Re: Satan wants me for a scarecrow by bondjedi	penguin fiend 216.207.132.167	20-Jan-04/7:06 PM
pure awesomeness
Re: Drunk Satan by smlink84	penguin fiend 216.207.132.167	20-Jan-04/7:11 PM
it's a pretty good, random poem, and it's funnier than hell reading what all the anti-poetic jack-asses (horus, poetandknowit, dark angel, lastobelus ) who can't write say about your stuff
Re: Devil, BEWARE!!! by gay	penguin fiend 216.207.132.167	20-Jan-04/7:20 PM
no angel is better than a light angel, my quasi-yoda friend...please don't take that as a bad thing, never stop writing, cuz i like reading what people say about poetry they don't understand, 'tis quite funny, I give you an 8
Re: Last love poem by penguin fiend	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54	20-Jan-04/7:36 PM
You've been writing for awhile, and this is what you've arrived at?
Re: The Cookies by Blindpoetry	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54	20-Jan-04/7:37 PM
By the third stanza, I wanted to go back to the first one, and stay there. 4
Re: Forgive and regret by penguin fiend	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54	20-Jan-04/7:56 PM
Now that was about as stimulating as watching a caterpillar take a shit on a leaf, but with less leaf and more...
Re: Flame Game by Goad	zodiac 67.240.155.106	20-Jan-04/8:29 PM
I like the hips part. Never heard talk about hips like that.