regarding some deleted poem...	Mona Lisa 195.92.168.167	21-Jan-04/1:56 PM
Beatifully captures femininity
regarding some deleted poem...	Everyone 81.128.148.29	21-Jan-04/2:08 PM
It is not your place to criticise the Church, young harlot. True, many Churches worship a nude being nailed to two planks of wood, but what you fail to notice, despite the painfully inadequate obscuration afforded by the thin veil you drape o'er your obscene buttocks, is that beneath our silken robes, we too are mere nudelingtons. -0-
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 152.30.201.24	21-Jan-04/2:46 PM
Sorry, papists and rosicrucians shouldn't write poetry. There's been no hip papist poetry (or rosicrucian, for that matter,) since that crazy Mechtild of Magdebourg rag, which reached the height (or depth) of blah status-quo pop-culture approbation when it was re-worked into the dance track 'Hit me baby one more time' (with only the word 'baby' inserted for 'Yahweh'.) Besides, it's the only thing which makes papists and rosicrucians more predictable than their usual speech, other than commenting prudishly on other people's bohemian poetry posts, which is (clearly) all you're going to find here. We clearly do not want you to believe our ways (which we have none,) nor do we accept that God (which there is none) put us here for a purpose (which there is, but not the one He planned.) Once again, zero. Read it to your Bible study.
Re: Drying, Cracked Roots by AnotherNothing	some deleted user 205.188.209.14	21-Jan-04/5:43 PM
i like it, a little depressing for me right now but good. What exactly is the theme, im thick headed
Re: Gethsemane (or, Jesus learns what's up with dying) by zodiac	Everyone 163.1.146.87	21-Jan-04/9:23 AM
I raised the issue of why Jesu "prayed to Himself" in Gethsemane, and why He asked for an alternative to crucifixion when He should have already known the answer to His question, with a Christian, and the Christian said that when Jesu swooped down to planet Earth and took on humanoid form He was subject to the same fears and pains that humans feel, and that whilst in humanoid form He may not have been omniscient. What do you say to that? I don't think you can say Jesu IS God at the same time as saying He wasn't omniscient whilst in humanoid form, because that would make Him simultaneously identical to God and different from God. The best you can do is say Jesus was PART of God, but as far as I know no Christians endorse that view, and it is not backed up by the Bible. In short: buncombe.
Re: Focus Your Attention, Friend by AnotherNothing	some deleted user 205.188.209.14	21-Jan-04/5:47 PM
i like the rhyme, but i noticed all your poems titles are the first lines of the poem. Maybe you should work on the titles, they could add some more spice to the rest of the work
Re: His Master's Jodhpurs by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	horus8 24.126.116.54	21-Jan-04/5:47 PM
You are easilly the greatest poet alive, and I have no idea what jodhpurs are, which only adds to my first statement.
Re: His Master's Jodhpurs by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	AnotherNothing 65.73.160.59	21-Jan-04/6:27 PM
Reminds me of Poe, and like horus said, i don't even know what Jodhpurs are.
Re: bimby by sneakerpimp	Everyone 163.1.146.87	21-Jan-04/9:52 AM
You said "dump with love".
Re: My Daffodil bulb by YoungLady	Everyone 163.1.146.87	21-Jan-04/10:21 AM
Ahh, but could not the same also be said of a freshly laid stool, glistening like dew in the morning sunlight? When I woke up The sun was hot It shone upon My chamber pot And then I saw A coil of brown And felt I'd best Inform the towne On other days The things I dump Are mostly grey And not so plump But this young brown So sleek and proud Is sure to draw A mighty crowd!
Re: Forgive and regret by penguin fiend	Everyone 163.1.146.87	21-Jan-04/11:15 AM
"You can ask me to punish you with turds, you can ask me strike you into the ground with my cane, you can ask me to slaughter your children with an axe, you can ask me have your name slandered at the bi-monthly Cheesesmith's Convention, you can ask me withdraw your trouser allowance, and you can ask me to ride you into towne like a donkey. You can even ask me to return you to the dung-heap I found you on. But there is one thing you cannot ask of me; one thing that is beyond all my powers as a Gentleman to endure... You cannot ask me to forgive you. For that is something no man can do." Earl Proud-Stocking XV to his butler, upon catching the feeble manservant parading around the Bedchamber in his Master's Jodhpurs.
regarding some deleted poem...	Everyone 163.1.146.87	21-Jan-04/11:32 AM
http://www.driversalacart.com/ and http://www.dslextreme.com/users/rotts4su/ethics.html
Re: Sonnet For a Porn Star by mikejedw	zodiac 67.240.211.223	21-Jan-04/12:51 PM
First line's not pentameter. Otherwise good.
Re: Last Night by middenHeap	basit_i 161.184.182.110	21-Jan-04/1:26 PM
aura-ific.
regarding some deleted poem...	basit_i 161.184.182.110	21-Jan-04/1:30 PM
i like the first half better.
Re: My deepest thoughts by poetandknowit	richa 81.178.250.150	21-Jan-04/1:31 PM
Personally I think toilet poems are a valid art form. http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=2690
Re: Fall of all by penguin fiend	basit_i 161.184.182.110	21-Jan-04/1:31 PM
hmm yes. know what you mean. what about constructive interference?
Re: The back of a shovel? by horus8	basit_i 161.184.182.110	21-Jan-04/1:33 PM
hmm. imagery is intense, at any rate. for whatever that's worth. ^_^
Re: Crazy about you by nicole081083	Everyone 131.111.212.215	21-Jan-04/1:41 PM
ABORT ABORT ABORT
Re: bimby by sneakerpimp	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54	21-Jan-04/1:47 PM
It is most unkind of you to make me reach that far from my pot to find my teeth. Therefore, pack your things, you're fired from poetry. You are aware that your poem would have been much better if you'd have only repeated the word "Bermph" outloud indefinately.