Re: Black Beach by Caducus	A. Nomaly 199.182.34.52	7-Jan-04/7:30 PM
When you became a hapless romantic I lost all interest. Without the universe all around it is nothing but a two-dimensional depiction of romance
Re: Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72	7-Jan-04/7:40 PM
here's a bone for your dogs.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72	7-Jan-04/7:43 PM
What did you do? ya got wings. what fer? Roll- on the green slopes. I saw horses. in my mind. no, I mean....awwwwfergetit.
Re: Waiting to inhale (Stardust & God's Black Nostril) by Don-Quixote	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72	7-Jan-04/8:10 PM
First of all, I know very little about drugs, how to "do" them and what the factors are involving such. So some of this poem loses me. But that's my lack of knowledge, not your poem. Moldy crackers should go, I think. Disneys' Aladdin popped into my head. Assuming (andante) is referring to winter, I love it. Had to look up the word though. I love the fleas, wool plaugue, and scarlet clouds. Over all I think it's fine as it sits. neener neener neener.
Re: The Temperment of a Learning Housewife by some1namedjerf	A. Nomaly 199.182.34.52	7-Jan-04/8:20 PM
hee hee heee
Re: Waiting to inhale (Stardust & God's Black Nostril) by Don-Quixote	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72	7-Jan-04/8:24 PM
no. soldered sushi.
Re: Sonnet Eighteen by devilishnutcase	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72	7-Jan-04/8:32 PM
4 for the comments 2 for the psuedo-sonnet.
Re: Down The Hall by Blindpoetry	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72	7-Jan-04/6:25 PM
A penny is single, solitary, small, one. An excellent image to work with. Stretch the penny over your poem. Poetry aint easy kiddo. I'd lend you my copy of "Poetry for dummies", except it is part of me, permanently. I had it sewn under the skin of my left thigh.
Re: Black Beach by Caducus	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72	7-Jan-04/6:29 PM
Something about this screams SONNET! There's plenty of material and plenty of great lines. "...white flag still blows" gives me an image of the backsides of crashing waves from the air.
Re: Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72	7-Jan-04/6:34 PM
I hope this is a first draft. Pull a draught and pull in the laces on this new shoe.
Re: Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	some deleted user 24.222.81.233	8-Jan-04/3:19 AM
Hey listen i foughted in vietnam. hey listen...goota go nowe
Re: The Breedling by Everyone	little_big_nose 216.207.132.135	7-Jan-04/6:41 PM
shut up all of you, everyone, you did a good job with this, everybody else, shut up
regarding some deleted poem...	little_big_nose 216.207.132.135	7-Jan-04/6:47 PM
niiiiice, whoever gave you a 2 should burn in Heaven...it was prolly some prep that this poem was about, you have a gift dude
Re: A Kiss by devilishnutcase	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72	7-Jan-04/6:49 PM
Leaves? I think you mean LeaDs. (May) my lips... Compact and honest.
Re: Waiting to inhale (Stardust & God's Black Nostril) by Don-Quixote	cleverdevice 212.219.142.161	8-Jan-04/5:33 AM
Sushi is not actually raw fish, it is lightly fried in vinegar. As such, I give you -1- cos the rest of the poem is an affront to my beliefs.
regarding some deleted poem...	little_big_nose 216.207.132.135	7-Jan-04/6:49 PM
way better than a 5...i tried to write something like that but it came out way worse, applause to you my good man
regarding some deleted poem...	d35 169.244.70.148	8-Jan-04/5:51 AM
ok
regarding some deleted poem...	DreamerSupreme 69.19.183.160	7-Jan-04/6:59 PM
Well, I think its smashin..
Re: Confuse Me by hatedestruction	nothingtoanyone 65.125.114.157	8-Jan-04/10:12 AM
wow, that's what i thought when i read this...
Re: BreakBeat TimeTravel by nentwined	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72	7-Jan-04/7:00 PM
igpbgh. that is all.