| Re: The Service by forestchild7 |
little_big_nose 216.207.134.80 |
4-Jan-04/6:09 PM |
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it's dark and almost morbid. Pretty good
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| Re: Thinkin of ya! by KezzY20 |
little_big_nose 216.207.134.80 |
4-Jan-04/6:11 PM |
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This could have only been written by someone in love
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Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
4-Jan-04/7:26 PM |
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some optimism for a change (even if we are all screwed).
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| Re: The wise by richa |
Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
4-Jan-04/7:28 PM |
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nice one Richa - I like the concept of a waning grasp lots.
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Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
4-Jan-04/7:31 PM |
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cool.
I wonder if it would be better for the omission of "ranch".
a ten nonetheless.
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| Re: The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
daniella 200.68.77.190 |
4-Jan-04/9:41 PM |
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best part about this is envisioning the graphic details of you hovering over your keyboard elaborating the little crosses... you cute lil devil you.
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| Re: Love by Pervy Elf |
tuthaliash 24.165.92.14 |
4-Jan-04/10:31 PM |
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My sentiments exactly...and I do mean exactly. Witness, and live to love again!
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basit_i 161.184.192.216 |
5-Jan-04/12:28 AM |
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| Re: lost it all('ego' totally crushed) by crwncka1 |
crwncka1 66.141.119.8 |
5-Jan-04/3:00 AM |
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95% of amercians live in the false 'ego' state... culture/society conditioning of the brain, only removed uncovering all the negative layer by layer via true understanding of it.. took about 18 months of self-dialog/work/poetry 500+ pages for my ego witch was the size of texas.. haha
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| Re: Mixed Feelings by PunkyPanda |
nothingtoanyone 65.125.114.157 |
5-Jan-04/10:23 AM |
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I m so sorry i read this and didnt tell you how much I liked so I ll tell you now I like it this much ______________________________________________________
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INTRANSIT 64.12.96.46 |
5-Jan-04/12:04 PM |
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10. can(s) for perfection. It's good to have more than one tool in the box.
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little_big_nose 216.207.132.65 |
5-Jan-04/6:03 PM |
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I'm kinda the opposite of that one person, i love the begining but not the end
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| Re: Don't Care by LuV_jOhNnY |
little_big_nose 216.207.132.65 |
5-Jan-04/6:14 PM |
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nice, i know how you feel and you're not alone
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Patsy 24.67.189.245 |
5-Jan-04/3:16 PM |
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i enjoy the second half much more than the first, save for the delicious "wild cells". "Scar shower", too, is enough to take one. For some reason it seems uncharacteristically short for you, but that is neither here nor there--just observation. Now who knows what? i need no point-fives for this.
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| Re: we can't walk forever by somemorepoetry |
little_big_nose 216.207.132.65 |
5-Jan-04/6:16 PM |
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yea, whatever floats your goat
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| Re: Love by Pervy Elf |
little_big_nose 216.207.132.65 |
5-Jan-04/6:19 PM |
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totally right, it sux big time
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| Re: A Different Point of View by Blindpoetry |
little_big_nose 216.207.132.65 |
5-Jan-04/6:22 PM |
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pretty much yea, all women do that
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| Re: tullip by christian |
little_big_nose 216.207.132.65 |
5-Jan-04/6:29 PM |
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I'm more of a cat guy, but this is a damn good poem
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| Re: Ghosts I by timfowler |
little_big_nose 216.207.132.65 |
5-Jan-04/6:31 PM |
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you can inturpet this poem in so amny many ways it's great
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Dark Angle 68.101.115.45 |
5-Jan-04/11:36 PM |
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wow, i just looked at the ratings, i thought this one was good, i guesssss i was wrong. oh well, does anyone have any comments on it for me? thanks.
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