Re: mothers by biggy	Quarton 12.217.221.61	20-Dec-03/9:59 AM
Different but I liked it. Quite rhythmic and a sincere tribute. Not sure about the exlusion of capital letters butI have written some the same.
Re: Modern Man by ShaNoN+960317485	Quarton 12.217.221.61	20-Dec-03/10:26 AM
A lot to contemplate in this piece. Quite exceptional in content and style. Kind of a Brave New World feel to this and what a neat way of expressing the new by means of the old. Being a quantum mehanic's junkie, I could relate to the fourth stanza in particular but hell, I can relate to all you express in this fascinating tale that would warm the heart of any Existentialist worth his/her salt. Camus would be proud tho I may be misinterpreting part of your meaning. Regardless, a ten!
regarding some deleted poem...	Samantha 198.81.26.81	20-Dec-03/10:55 AM
this was interesting
Re: Modern Man by ShaNoN+960317485	Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.126.116.54	20-Dec-03/12:29 PM
What truly impressed me about this poem was my inability to even get through the first line, bravo brilliant.
Re: mothers by biggy	Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.126.116.54	20-Dec-03/12:33 PM
You mum are a broken paerl nexlace part timing as a gloew in tha dark anal beads. This 0 pretty much sums up how I feel about vulva.
Re: Paint Remover by Samantha	Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.126.116.54	20-Dec-03/12:35 PM
I often find running over something at a high rate of speed alleviates this sort of tension.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	20-Dec-03/6:08 PM
Been some time since my last mushy love poem posting.
Re: I Love You by Blindpoetry	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	20-Dec-03/6:53 PM
I don't know, spence... I doesn't say much more that what's said in the title alone.
Re: Mixed Feelings by PunkyPanda	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	20-Dec-03/6:55 PM
i'd like to see the sentiment without any attemps at making it rhyme.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	20-Dec-03/6:58 PM
is interesting enough - particularly: "the water of a chain linked son the production of one cell to a billion to none" Needs to be about 70% this length (and complexity)
Re: 12673 Jalepeno ave. Chino, Ca. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	20-Dec-03/7:04 PM
Yep. It put me in the moment. Somehow I found myself trying to think of a different last line. I don't know if it was me enjoying the aftertaste; imagining possibilities/extending the vision - or a hunger pain. Did you try other ones?
regarding some deleted poem...	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54	20-Dec-03/10:11 PM
God you're so horribly down to earth, blahch. 9.
Re: Little Bird by Blindpoetry	GregDeEgg 66.43.198.38	21-Dec-03/6:19 PM
Cute, simple. I like the feeling of dependancy, coupled with the feeling of want. And all of this expressed with bargaining, but a mutual kind. The kind that is best found with a good friend.
Re: the rose layed on the barren grave by josh_5o	Blindpoetry 68.106.171.15	21-Dec-03/7:07 PM
I'm seeing alot of 'the's ... Try to lower the number of them and start your lines... uh.. differently.. :-D
Re: Little Bird by Blindpoetry	dragonfly 65.234.234.254	21-Dec-03/7:36 PM
Oh, Little Bird I don't want to see you dead A feathery pile of green and white turd How I'd miss you shitting on my head
Re: Ongoing by tadpole	tadpole 24.55.117.36	21-Dec-03/8:45 PM
just wanted to start a poem
Re: To Mourn the Loss of an Old Friend by GregDeEgg	tadpole 24.55.117.36	21-Dec-03/8:47 PM
Eternal rest grant unto her. . .
Re: To Mourn the Loss of an Old Friend by GregDeEgg	horus8 24.126.116.54	21-Dec-03/9:01 PM
good poetry
Re: You Give Me Love by Free2Rhyme15	horus8 24.126.116.54	21-Dec-03/9:01 PM
Bert.
regarding some deleted poem...	Everyone 81.128.136.167	21-Dec-03/9:53 PM
Trust me, I'm a stomach.