Re: it's all quite obviously one big joke by somemorepoetry	horus8 24.126.116.54	22-Dec-03/12:32 AM
Firm.
Re: You.. by Ariella	horus8 24.126.116.54	22-Dec-03/12:38 AM
Also, an ellipse? Is ".."... Three dots chief, you'll learn that in highschool, or not.
Re: TRUTH by somemorepoetry	horus8 24.126.116.54	22-Dec-03/12:40 AM
He probably has a hemoroid named uranus.
Re: You.. by Ariella	horus8 24.126.116.54	22-Dec-03/12:37 AM
Please, if you are going to give me a 5? Learn how to fucking spell. "subconscious" you twit. here's your five back, buy a dictionary.
Re: Ongoing by tadpole	horus8 24.126.116.54	22-Dec-03/12:30 AM
not bad.
regarding some deleted poem...	hipster flare 209.68.78.136	22-Dec-03/10:11 AM
me too.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shardik 24.126.116.54	22-Dec-03/12:56 PM
Brilliant
Re: Time's End by Quarton	Shardik 24.126.116.54	22-Dec-03/1:37 PM
You've been staring at the glaciers for to long buddy. So here's a 10! Merry Christmas
Re: Large Man on peach sandel by horus8	Shardik 24.126.116.54	22-Dec-03/1:38 PM
Ms. Calvetti must be flattered.
Re: Friday afternoon Zoo by INTRANSIT	Everyone 81.128.136.167	22-Dec-03/3:22 PM
Is this a poeme about the hustle and bustle of our hectic modern lifestyles?
regarding some deleted poem...	Everyone 81.128.136.167	22-Dec-03/3:29 PM
Did you deliberately write "sings" instead of "signs" and "sing" instead of "sign"? If it wasn't deliberate, I'd say there's a 93.51% chance that you are dyslexic. Am I right?
Re: TRUTH by somemorepoetry	Everyone 81.128.136.167	22-Dec-03/3:33 PM
At some point in your life, you decided to write a poeme about God smoking, and about stars looking like ashes. Why?
Re: her treasure by amber1028	Everyone 81.128.136.167	22-Dec-03/3:45 PM
It's difficult to feel any sympathy for the elderly when just last week an old man wandered into a playground full of children and chewed their cheeks off.
Re: You Give Me Love by Free2Rhyme15	Everyone 81.128.136.167	22-Dec-03/3:53 PM
You can't legislate desire; it has to come from within. Having said that, your use of "glee" to rhyme with "see" and "love" to rhyme with "above" is quite possibly the most staggeringly important contribution to English literature since J.R.Hartley's discovery of the letter "p".
Re: Paint Remover by Samantha	Everyone 81.128.136.167	22-Dec-03/4:01 PM
I think it's fascinating that people wear metaphorical masks to hide their less sophisticated character traits from society. On the outside, I'm a committed Christian and passionate racist. But on the inside, I'm a trenchant buffoon who likes running into cake shops and pulling down his trousers. Masks are important, aren't they?
Re: Ongoing by tadpole	sliver 63.189.17.188	22-Dec-03/9:02 PM
Anxiously awaiting more. Good thoughts, eternity is waiting for all
Re: Paint Remover by Samantha	sliver 63.189.17.188	22-Dec-03/9:11 PM
Masks can be very important sometimes, but you must be able to remove them, or they will become a part of you. Keep submitting!
Re: Friday afternoon Zoo by INTRANSIT	sliver 63.189.17.188	22-Dec-03/9:13 PM
Perhaps because we need more than ourselves to feel alive. I enjoy that zoo (within reason)
Re: Words: lost in translation by fair12	sliver 63.189.17.188	22-Dec-03/9:18 PM
YES! That is how I feel reading Shelley and Wordsworth,and so many others, looking for those velvet words to caress my mind and soul as my own vacant words could never begin to do. Well done nice sentiment. A well deserved 10!
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.189.17.188	22-Dec-03/9:20 PM
Buy some bright paint, Live a little.