| Re: Birthday of a dead guy by Bobjim |
SupremeDreamer 204.31.175.154 |
10-Dec-03/6:44 PM |
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Want to play some mortal kombat with me?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
kingit 67.68.48.102 |
10-Dec-03/6:55 PM |
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I like that- "cold cattle huddled together at the steering wheel",my snowballs would melt in your hand!...I lost my Grandmother this year, too.
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| Re: Truckers should not be poets by INTRANSIT |
horus8 24.126.116.54 |
10-Dec-03/6:56 PM |
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The blue collar transition my friend. If I get there first know that I will help you get there too.
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| Re: Precious Thing by cleverdevice |
kingit 67.68.48.102 |
10-Dec-03/7:05 PM |
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| Re: Death & the Twisted Tree by SupremeDreamer |
kingit 67.68.48.102 |
10-Dec-03/7:18 PM |
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i can see your transcendence is inspiration! lucky I can't remember NOT being surrounded by the big black..
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
kingit 67.68.48.102 |
10-Dec-03/7:26 PM |
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I knew a Cindy just like that! I kicked her off the bus!
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| Re: Death & the Twisted Tree by SupremeDreamer |
darby pyn 198.81.26.40 |
10-Dec-03/7:56 PM |
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it's a nice visual. an epic in black and white.
for some reason I see "night of the hunter" in
my mind when I read this with mitchem as the devil.
very nice. 8
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| Re: Head. by darby pyn |
SupremeDreamer 204.31.160.4 |
10-Dec-03/8:33 PM |
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Nice poem- but the title? sucks. Unfortunately I can not suggest anything better. Blessed with nine.
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| Re: standing still by phbiscuit |
SupremeDreamer 204.31.160.4 |
10-Dec-03/8:36 PM |
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Not bad- a bit long and wordy though. I'd suggest shortening this a bit. Blessed with seven.
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| Re: Precious Thing by cleverdevice |
cleverdevice 212.219.142.161 |
11-Dec-03/4:47 AM |
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I was thinking, imagine a really selfish Thom Yorke, and it just poured out.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
fair12 66.84.225.2 |
11-Dec-03/6:57 AM |
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Haven't lost her yet thank God - but it's coming - and the thought hurts just as much.
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| Re: One Moment in Time by katie_jean |
sliver 63.190.80.4 |
11-Dec-03/7:19 AM |
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I wouldn't know, maybe I'm just too ugly for things like this to happen to me. Even briefly. And there is too an image here! Way in here.
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| Re: WHEN by Samantha |
sliver 63.190.80.4 |
11-Dec-03/7:23 AM |
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A thousang screaming women, there's a painful thought.
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| Re: Holding on for Jesus by Everyone |
nentwined 66.92.28.14 |
11-Dec-03/7:47 AM |
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For sarcasm, this is pretty fun.
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| Re: Christ For Sale by Caducus |
Joe-joe 170.28.4.4 |
11-Dec-03/8:42 AM |
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Caducus,
Your work is quite skillful and this piece is no exception. However, I continue to be puzzled at the amount of energy and attention directed towards criticism of the church and those who believe in the Christian God. Regardless of who authors such work the bottom line is always the same; a substitution of the author's own sense of reality for the reality they so ardently attack. Whose version of reality are you hoping the delusional and mislead "believers" embrace?....the one they glean from their own senses and experiences or the one you profess is objectively derived? But as I said, the work is quite good. -9-
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| Re: the universe is throbbing by FreeFormFixation |
<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54 |
11-Dec-03/9:46 AM |
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Why would you ruin a great poem by injecting it with politics?
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| Re: Christ For Sale by Caducus |
Everyone 81.128.20.29 |
11-Dec-03/10:43 AM |
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Yeah! Great use of "slut matriarch" as an alternative to "mother"!!!!111
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54 |
11-Dec-03/10:44 AM |
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| Re: Hurt by PunkyPanda |
nothingtoanyone 65.125.114.157 |
11-Dec-03/11:49 AM |
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| Re: Let Go by PunkyPanda |
nothingtoanyone 65.125.114.157 |
11-Dec-03/11:50 AM |
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And what do you Know, another good one lol.
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