Re: Dolphins Of Dorset by Caducus	scitz 195.92.168.166	8-Dec-03/11:00 PM
sweet bro, real sweet
Re: ~haiku~ by Entelechist	grumpycrafter 141.158.84.92	8-Dec-03/5:04 PM
So, this is haiku. It's certainly discriptive.
Re: One Moment in Time by katie_jean	richa 81.178.227.42	8-Dec-03/3:57 PM
Scarcely an image in the entire poem. I want to believe you I do. But its so distant, just words.
regarding some deleted poem...	grumpycrafter 141.158.84.92	8-Dec-03/4:46 PM
Like nothing I've read, but I haven't read much poetry. I don't understand what you're trying to say, but you certainly say it in a unique way.
Re: Dolphins Of Dorset by Caducus	grumpycrafter 141.158.84.92	8-Dec-03/4:55 PM
Expressive poem. I could see the blackthorn thickets and your father removing the thorns. I really loved it.
Re: Grandma's lullaby by timvick473662003	grumpycrafter 141.158.84.92	8-Dec-03/5:01 PM
I like it.
Re: The Morning Star by Shardik	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	8-Dec-03/8:34 PM
"I didn't dare ask who's Cause it felt like mine..." sweeeet.
regarding some deleted poem...	kingit 67.69.62.220	8-Dec-03/8:59 PM
I have a big little problem...I live in an infra-red world. This is very cute!
Re: ~haiku~ by Entelechist	kingit 67.69.62.220	8-Dec-03/9:07 PM
This works for me-8.
regarding some deleted poem...	kingit 67.69.62.220	8-Dec-03/9:10 PM
This kicks!
Re: The Morning Star by Shardik	kingit 67.69.62.220	8-Dec-03/9:22 PM
Haunting little toe-tapper, with violins, etc!
Re: From Hell, a Vilanelle by horus8	kingit 67.69.62.220	8-Dec-03/9:34 PM
Don't need no shit packed where I'm going! Vilanelle? hmmm, uhhh, villain-ess maybe?- ahh fuck, I give up, haven't seen one of them there (French?) dictionaries in a while. Fun read!
Re: The Morning Star by Shardik	dragonfly 65.234.197.7	8-Dec-03/9:57 PM
Hmm...if it's well past 2, then it's not really a midnight drive. A 9 nonetheless!
Re: Memory Fragment I (lets kill eachother) by SupremeDreamer	dragonfly 65.234.197.7	8-Dec-03/10:01 PM
I met these two people.
Re: Grandma's lullaby by timvick473662003	dragonfly 65.234.197.7	8-Dec-03/10:08 PM
I think subtlety could improve its effect.
Re: Outhouse by newagepoet2000	kingit 67.69.62.220	8-Dec-03/10:14 PM
NO friggin' way this is the worst of THIS site!!! I'm goin ta git shit-feced.
Re: ~haiku~ by Entelechist	Entelechist 193.131.186.150	9-Dec-03/1:23 AM
Hi Richa, Thanks for making a comment on this Haiku. I agree with you that a haiku has to be self-explanatory to work, so I won't try and explain the last line. Glad you got some inkling of the sentiments behind it. Happy scribbling.
Re: Poppy,diamond,s and twoo coward's by The_Third_Isis	darby pyn 198.81.26.40	9-Dec-03/1:24 AM
SWEET ANGST. I LOVE YOUR REVENGE. 9
Re: The Ballet Studio by Corey McHattan	airmankeg 150.177.81.2	9-Dec-03/6:20 AM
Great poem!
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 147.154.235.52	9-Dec-03/6:41 AM
awesome title pulled me in. the double "her her" - intentional? and "missing live" do you want that to be "life"? maybe, since you use impecunious to describe the jury, you want to say "richer". small nits aside, I like this strangeness.