Re: The Glint by peaceseeker	ARTIE 66.68.146.139	9-Dec-03/10:37 AM
Except for a couple of light redundancies, I liked the message but got tangled in the flow. Maybe I should've had my coffee first.
regarding some deleted poem...	dragonfly 209.86.244.47	9-Dec-03/11:54 AM
Kriannah's one fierce bitch. She can put it down, flip it and reverse it.
regarding some deleted poem...	dragonfly 165.247.213.192	9-Dec-03/2:55 PM
I'm amazed at how little blue boy obtained his little blue license to operate his little blue wagon.
Re: Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik	cleverdevice 212.219.142.161	10-Dec-03/6:31 AM
Nadine for Girls Aloud, hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, oh shit, need tissues. Good work old boy/girl. 9.
Re: Air sickness bag by Shardik	cleverdevice 212.219.142.161	10-Dec-03/6:33 AM
Amusing, yes, amusing.
Re: Poppy,diamond,s and twoo coward's by The_Third_Isis	dragonfly 165.247.213.192	9-Dec-03/3:18 PM
*is speechless*
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.126.116.54	9-Dec-03/3:20 PM
I'm a little black boy, I live in an utterly black world. I drive a black wagon, and have a huge black cock. I play in a wheel chair, but I must be careful not to shit in my sock and accidentilly beat myself to death with it.
Re: Angelic Fornication by The_Third_Isis	dragonfly 165.247.213.192	9-Dec-03/3:22 PM
I was wearing the same outfit during my visit to Buenaventura.F
Re: Tsunami Love by The_Third_Isis	dragonfly 165.247.213.192	9-Dec-03/3:26 PM
A lot of beautiful imagery here.
Re: Outhouse by newagepoet2000	capachijim 24.168.26.48	9-Dec-03/3:33 PM
kill yourself, do it twice
Re: Outhouse by newagepoet2000	Bachus 24.126.116.54	9-Dec-03/4:19 PM
Not yet, but when I do? I won't be because of you.
Re: The Fountain of Youth by miraclemaker	Bachus 24.126.116.54	9-Dec-03/6:45 PM
An a boring pouring at that. 6.
Re: Painting the Town by dragonfly	The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151	9-Dec-03/8:55 PM
Some actions and words can leave you *spechless* Scent isnt it so true like gingerbread,morning coffe- dawn lingering in the air of course can be very INVIGORATING in an open market say medellin. and compared to a stroll in buenos aires at the same hour..thank's for the visual of the web & the fly. and to relive a few moments of my own.Keep leaving me bread crumb's straight to you'r poems. CHEERS to your holidays.
Re: Urban Nights by capachijim	The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151	9-Dec-03/10:54 PM
WHY be blue this is good.Neon lighting by nature a 10
regarding some deleted poem...	Bachus 24.126.116.54	9-Dec-03/11:02 PM
Honestly, this one was pleasant, but rather dull. 7.
Re: Rustling Wind by laura2224rn	The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151	9-Dec-03/11:05 PM
you get a 9. for the elegance as oposed to hobos in 8t's hood. The contrast is finese, style and grace. It's 2 a.m. and I'm of to dream with that vision in your poem thank you.A promice we all forget about at times.
regarding some deleted poem...	The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151	9-Dec-03/11:15 PM
I saw and felt all this when my g-baby Shadow blue was born one snowy november 99 in Flagstaff Az. Vision a gift to morph within the universe...I was walking with that lil papoose she is part navajo a week old, letting the soft snowflakes fall on her raven black hair..her little body warmed my hands. Thanks for taking me back to a wintry moment in Flagstaff. Happy holidays. a 10
Re: To Dark Angel by zagerXizer	richa 81.178.243.84	10-Dec-03/11:19 AM
I love the way you say this poeme took five minutes to write before you even reached the end. As an end line I suggest this poem should be: 'it only took me 6 minutes to write, 6.02 now, damn 6.10.... ..... ..... .....
regarding some deleted poem...	dragonfly 67.192.110.19	10-Dec-03/11:44 AM
I've never seen snow (I've only lived in SF and Puerto Rico in my short life.) This poem makes me want to move to Utah and pee in the snow.
Re: From Hell, a Vilanelle by horus8	Bobjim 81.135.33.143	10-Dec-03/1:14 PM
Average. Not nearly random or insane enough.