regarding some deleted poem...	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54	5-Dec-03/12:06 PM
So serious. but I guess EIGHTY will do that to a person. Jesus.
Re: Gifts by miraclemaker	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54	5-Dec-03/12:08 PM
What?
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 147.154.235.53	4-Dec-03/10:23 AM
No, No - I got it; don't tell me... Hmmmmm [rubs chin]. This is a representation of evolutionary paths - forever changing, but everpresent. Genetic sequences adding and subtracting, random selection - traits and characteristics bound and unbound. Though races may differ they are still of the same material, yet always growing/adapting; never adult... OR this represents the capitalist inclination to think everything, including time itself, revolves around the same economic, and therfore social goals - a kind of socioeconomicentric world-view similar to that of a child: "mine, mine, gimme gimme". ORRR - a pscychographic representation of the street bound. Each day a repetitive drug induced halucinogenic voyage of universal, timeless understanding. Days bleed into nights, street bleeds into sky, meaning blends into non-meaning. OR! The dichotomy between the mechanical (presently inanimate) world and the living biological world (the subtext of "life" defined included). non-veined leaves of evergreens and veined leaves of changeable plants (oaks, maples) representing the two camps. Grey and silver of machines, pink (white) and black of humanity juxtaposed over a temporal full spectrum background. It could also be about cooking, a specific location in an urban setting, daycare scandals, wood preservatives, or fundraising.
regarding some deleted poem...	BleedingRose 4.7.102.114	4-Dec-03/10:26 AM
interesting. you managed to muster enough creativity to get a few laughs out of the more immature users of the site, all by just changing two of my lines. i have little problem with you polluting the listings with your own crap, so just keep to that. and maybe credit me if you're crude enough to brutalize another one of my poems.
regarding some deleted poem...	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	4-Dec-03/10:44 AM
APPLAUSE CHRYSTAL...way to dig. I knew you had it in you! I love this one. :-)
regarding some deleted poem...	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	4-Dec-03/10:47 AM
eh...seems a bit bland. I like your username though.
regarding some deleted poem...	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	4-Dec-03/10:48 AM
my sausage is perfect.
regarding some deleted poem...	fair12 66.84.225.2	4-Dec-03/10:59 AM
shhhhhh - Shuushin - just enjoy the words. (all your analyzing just might have given me a headache). Richa - very nice tone - deep thoughts in so few lines. Lovely.
Re: xxxmas by kingit	kingit 67.69.63.24	4-Dec-03/1:43 PM
Yeah but, see how I pick IT up in the 2nd stanza, eh?
Re: Being H.U.M.A.N. by SatanicSuperman	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	4-Dec-03/1:58 PM
*breath Other than that, I like it. The rhym is a little choppy, but I think you could smooth it out pretty easily.
regarding some deleted poem...	kingit 67.69.63.24	4-Dec-03/2:26 PM
I stuggle for meaning but enjoy the melody(?)...i'm a ding-dong, excuse me, I can't give you anything constructive, will a 7 do?
Re: Return To Narnia by Caducus	Shardik 24.126.116.54	4-Dec-03/2:34 PM
Focused, and well written. Poetry.
Re: Hey, Zeus has disco Balls by Shardik	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	4-Dec-03/3:48 PM
fun
regarding some deleted poem...	Shardik 24.126.116.54	4-Dec-03/4:26 PM
Once, I could touch my toes, but now I just let others.
Re: Sweet Dreams by MistressSnow	timvick473662003 12.27.34.2	4-Dec-03/4:44 PM
thats how i feel about my girl
Re: Was it real by mishy_lee	timvick473662003 12.27.34.2	4-Dec-03/4:50 PM
really good, i like it alot. very from the heart it seems, have a 9
regarding some deleted poem...	Shardik 24.126.116.54	4-Dec-03/6:01 PM
Fuck yeah.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shardik 24.126.116.54	4-Dec-03/6:15 PM
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regarding some deleted poem...	Lifeboatman 203.131.94.18	4-Dec-03/7:21 PM
good on you... 10
regarding some deleted poem...	ARTIE 66.68.146.139	5-Dec-03/10:12 AM
Stop the madness! You obviously like to hear your own "shattered fragments" of what you call [free] speech. Have you always been prone to ridicule others, or, did addiction do that to you? During that time, did you seek counseling or just stare into a mirror - blaming self-absorption as your cure? There once was a poet named manning who did gave his dick a fanning, as his cheese bleu high the World let this reply, "Thank DOG for Family Planning." If your pulmonary consciousness really demands priority, start living outside of a test tube. No more lies, there is only truth. Your "inner chaos demands balance", or at the least, a chemical additive. What a viscious circle you prescribe.