some deleted user
on some deleted poem
13 Nov 2003, 3:46 PM
blast those jesuits
Capitalize protean? Marshmallow has to go. It's too young. Beyond those, RRRRRoll'em!
I love the last line. living alone is great company
it says so mutch
are farcicles found in the frozen dessert aisle? are they eaten by Gary Larson?
Cows skip. Don't they?
these HAIKUS seem to me to be like modern art
only visible to some people.
my be thay are the kings new clothes?
Thank god I'm barely smart enough to avoid the late night lacquer asses. I like it better when you rhyme.
oh ok its all clear now nice i like it even more now that i know what its intenden to mean.perfect 10
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
13 Nov 2003, 2:47 PM
Beautifully composed. 10.
Nice little ditty. Poetry can be a cold shoulder to cry upon. 22.3334
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
13 Nov 2003, 2:55 PM
Fabulous! 10.
Z My point exactly. 23.7774
wow, thats a sad poem but its a good one.
Well I like your poem but then there arises that question why?lol
well the best of my wishes to ya.
good...
Dont get you examples here - they are mostly senryu.
This is to a haiku what a limerick is to a vilanelle. In other words? You failed.
That, and your helmet.
Probably your best.