Death will come to every seed, No one is willing to set down their gun, I don't understand this part...as if I understood the others, but this seems out of place. 18.9993

Buck up little one. You sound just as messy inside as out. 20.00006

Just wait till you hit bottom! 21.17489

Stood up? 16.55783

Beautiful. I think maybe a bit long winded. just a bit.

You've hit all the big stuff. gotta be somthing small. a broken wire, best guess. I never finished auto school. duh on me.

Try Click and Clack? Isn't the ground a bit hard there for a hole to be dug? A short in the ignition? For making me think in this diagnostic fashion- 23.33214

forget the shovel- use dynamite, save digging for the customer. Could be tweaked here and there, overall i bless you with a seven.

Blessed with eight, go in peace.

oi.. my evil powers are really suffering today, and now i feel an urge to add to the dad poems. I'll survive though, and heres a seven.

sal-- the last stanza is beautiful. try to pare down the rest, and you'll have a gem

Well, at least it even brought joy in the end. An acquaintance of mine put a cucumber dildo in a salad served to several. They never knew, that wasn't dressing, though it was Zesty Italian.

asl.

Oh look, what a fucking surprise. It's another piece of prose with no poetic characteristics whatsoever, but the author has inserted arbitary linebreaks all over the place and deluded themselves into thinking it's a beautiful freeform poem of self-expression. You're shit.

Thanks IT, and Z - I see that, too - easy to get caught up in the thing. Once an image is there, hard to decide what to trim. I've been doing bonsai for the past 10 years or so - same damn thing. But for the sake of the ultimate vision, and the good of the plant... snip snip twist twist.

This reflects the communication barrier I have been dealing with lately - this resonates with regret - something I try never to feel - 10

what do you mean "surrounded by calm"

I like it, gives off a good vibe

nice poem, best of the day

lol