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on some deleted poem
1 Nov 2003, 8:45 AM
Chase that tail, doggy! 21.5665
Just cause you tried!
Gosh have you considered getting in touch with Dead Ringers, or perhaps you could resurect Spitting Image. Its quite simply uncanny. Do you look at all like him?
Best poem about a carriage clock i've ever seen. I always lose the winding key ass well!!!!
Vituperative is right in keeping with the tone of any sports event. Well done!!!!!
Also well done for Starring out that nigger. Nigger is such an offencive word isn't it. If more people printed Nigger as you have and the word nigger was not written in its hateful entirety perhaps racial tensions would be soothed and we could all live together in harmony. Ebony & Bl******s ass'twer!!! The Tabloid press in England do a similar thing in their papers and i can tell you its led to a real change in peoples language and attitudes!!!
Nigger
know change kiss for fuck!!
thats better.
YOU SHOULD READ MY POEM SEX WITH A WOOLY SHEEP
KNOW THAT IS GROSS.
I also like getting inside
Yes good, the only thing that sticks out as problematic is the use of the word 'aura' which I think lacks a certain precision.
I explod my firework all the time !!
And ilight my own fuse?
On a hot summers night would you offer your throat to
the wolf with the red roses!!!!!
Good job honey, very personal and a lot of meaning. I hope you keep it up.. who knows where this stuff might take ya :)
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
1 Nov 2003, 1:00 PM
Good poem, i honestly Did NOT know you had a poem called confusion too.. i am not copying you, maybe we are on the same brain wave...?
Fabulous!.... 10/10
hahahahahahahahahaha good poem good poem
Oh yeah i remember this one.... this one's great... ^.^
Can't you write a poeme about something that isn't the amazing, magical thing you think of your life as?
I love your poem, a very good job. Deep thinking as well.